MY POEM!!!, I wrote it today |
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 Jun 9 2004, 04:41 PM
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 black prep numba 1  Group: Member Posts: 519 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 19,144  |
I'm waaaaaaaaaaaaay to shy to show my moms and my friends soooo since I really don't have to see you guys...and I don't know you ppl all that well will you guys read it and tell me how its on a scale of 0 to 10?
Here it goes: You see me here in my own pain, and what do you do? You ignore, you walk pass with a hello and nothing more! All my anger, sadness, and gloom doesn't impress you. What will I have to do? I see you in your happiness, and get jealous of you! I wish I could go back in time where I was happy, and fine. Will you ever see that I'm not okay? That its all cause of you? That its not a game? That all my feelings are true. -Davon aka Ladii d That's all  Is it okay pleassssssse tell me!!! 
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Jun 9 2004, 04:42 PM
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moved to writings.
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Jun 9 2004, 05:42 PM
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ITs nice...I like and I think its a very nice and honest poem
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Jun 9 2004, 06:30 PM
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black prep numba 1 Group: Member Posts: 519 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 19,144 |
thanks
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