[Unholy Trinity], Sweet Dreams |
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 Feb 14 2007, 07:43 PM
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Sweet Dreams
I am sleeping the sleep of the just man The tired and weary man who fights alongside his brothers at arms Without hesitation or reprieve. Please do believe I am most sincere in my proclamation "Hail to the Chief, the Healer of the Sick, the Protector of the Helpless For you carry the burden of guilt and despair for all time Till the day of reckoning is upon you. And on this day of rapture, that dawn of judgement Those who stood tall will stand up and be seated with the highest of all. But those who fail the task set upon them shall never know The touch of promise, the glory of fulfillment, only the timidness of cowardice. Heed these words carefully, and take solace* in their meaning. Now go, sow the earth of your life, and watch careful as the stalker biding his time How your labor and hardship bring forth fruits of the divine*." My understanding is quite clear. I must warn those who stagger forward blindly into the dark Never knowing what bright wonders wait behind them. For this I must sleep, so goodnight and sweet dreams. |
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Feb 14 2007, 08:25 PM
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 Jake - The Unholy Trinity / Premiscuous Poeteer. Group: Member Posts: 1,272 Joined: May 2006 Member No: 411,316 |
Gay.. Next
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Feb 15 2007, 02:51 PM
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QUOTE(JakeKKing @ Feb 14 2007, 9:25 PM)  Gay.. Next Dont hate cause I use simplicity |
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| *Kathleen* |
Feb 15 2007, 08:48 PM
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My only qualm with this is the fact that you misspelled solace and divine.
This is my favorite stanza: QUOTE(The Abominable C-Pillar @ Feb 14 2007, 7:43 PM) But those who fail the task set upon them shall never know
The touch of promise, the glory of fulfillment, only the timidness of cowardice. Heed these words carefully, and take solice in their meaning. |
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Feb 15 2007, 10:21 PM
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QUOTE(Kathleen @ Feb 15 2007, 9:48 PM) My only qualm with this is the fact that you misspelled solace and divine. This is my favorite stanza: *thanks |
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Feb 16 2007, 04:21 PM
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 I've got ADD and magic markers. Oh the thrills I will have. Group: Member Posts: 624 Joined: Jul 2006 Member No: 445,743 |
I really enjoyed reading this. Your ability to write free-form poetry is enviable.
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| *Uronacid* |
Feb 16 2007, 09:42 PM
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jeez dude, I pray for your skillz... :[
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| *Monochrome.* |
Feb 16 2007, 09:48 PM
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nice. you are really talented.
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