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 Jan 9 2007, 03:11 AM
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 Jake - The Unholy Trinity / Premiscuous Poeteer.  Group: Member Posts: 1,272 Joined: May 2006 Member No: 411,316  |
 Please tell me what you think. What I should do, and critique. Thanks. If you have critiques...If you know any places where I can learn what you're saying please add link. Thanks. Please Remember to thumb your images 
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Jan 9 2007, 02:36 PM
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I love the entire thing! So creative.
Critique: The font of the text bothers me... maybe something more clear and plain, but modern at the same time. Also, the swirls on the right side sorta bother me. |
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Jan 9 2007, 03:39 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 7,149 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 213,509 |
I like the idea of it and I like the reflection of the angel also. I think the coloring of the angel's shirt is a bit..to fakish.
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Jan 9 2007, 04:52 PM
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Very nice, I really like this and its look really good. The text I think should be something cursive to match the swirls on the right side perhaps. Although it still looks good none-the-less.
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Jan 15 2007, 03:31 AM
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 chinky Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,566 Joined: Jul 2006 Member No: 434,437 |
Not bad. I think maybe smaller pixel text & different brushes would make it better?
Very nice, though! 
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