The First time, nice poem |
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 Nov 17 2006, 12:49 AM
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One teenager lost in love
That’s what I was Kissing was our hobby I loved him He liked me There was a party one day I walked upstairs Reminiscing the childhood days He followed me My body went shaky His body felt warm Showing each other some love I lost myself that day My integrity and pride For he dumped for the cheerleader The blonde girl with the long legs and rosy lips I lost myself to the guy of my dreams I should have waited for the day That I lost my most precious gift I should have lost it to the person I am with today |
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Nov 20 2006, 03:18 PM
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hm. i like it.
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Nov 23 2006, 10:08 PM
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Very straight forward yet really good.
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Dec 4 2006, 03:21 AM
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look for the stars as the sun goes down Group: Member Posts: 493 Joined: Aug 2006 Member No: 453,963 |
aww this is a really sweet poem. so tell me how does it feel the first time? does the guy take the lead or something? cuz i don't plan on having my "first time" until i'm 16. two years from now. ^_~
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