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Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 53 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 284,602 ![]() |
in my opinion, if any of you care LOL, it's alright and i like it.
i know i can should and definitely need to improve to make it a lot better. now, it's your turn : oh yeah, i'm going to be coding it. anyone interested in using it? anything else i should add?
do i need to improve on anything? should i change something? thanks in advance for your answers ![]() ![]() here's the new one => ![]() |
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*StanleyThePanda* |
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It looks pretty good, maybe some brushes?
Other than that, I like it. |
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![]() Trinie loves you ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,003 Joined: Sep 2006 Member No: 464,831 ![]() |
i like it alot!
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#4
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nice, add more. like more images, or like a nice texture foor aprts of the background, or vectorlike rays, but i like it
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#5
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![]() swoosha ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 69 Joined: Jan 2006 Member No: 359,804 ![]() |
i like it.
its good. |
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Very nice! :) I like the text title and navigation. I would add more color to the images and perhaps make one or a few stand out more to keep the focus on those images. As well, in the images in the top left corner that you tripled, perhaps fade the bottom two with different opacities?
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#7
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![]() show me a garden thats bursting to life ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,303 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,987 ![]() |
I like it..but I think you should do more to it!
Add some colouring effects to the images Add more brushes Add some more...pictures. I think they're pretty spaced out and doesn't look very well put together. I think it's off to a great start. It just needs...more. ![]() |
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#8
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Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 53 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 284,602 ![]() |
okay thanks!
![]() i know that i'll most likely be fixing the left corner duplication & adding more pictures. i'll edit when i'm done with the additions. |
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#9
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my lip gloss be poppin. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 118 Joined: Sep 2006 Member No: 460,291 ![]() |
It says 1006. =)
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Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 53 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 284,602 ![]() |
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my lip gloss be poppin. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 118 Joined: Sep 2006 Member No: 460,291 ![]() |
oh, erm, i thought it was supposed to be 2006.
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![]() (′ ・ω・`) ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,179 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 72,477 ![]() |
I like it...it's okay. But I personally don't like how the colors crash
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#13
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Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 53 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 284,602 ![]() |
oh, erm, i thought it was supposed to be 2006. ![]() thanks, btw. ![]() ohh, lol. i put the month and year. idk why. no problem about your personal site. QUOTE But I personally don't like how the colors crash they crash? hmm i thought they looked fine. i wanted one background color [ beige / tan ] and two other colors that stood out [ red & blue ] so you were more focused on the pictures. |
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*Infinite.* |
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I think its fine how it is to be honest. I don't really think it needs any brushes. I like the different color from the blues on top of the yellowish background. Nicely done
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Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 53 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 284,602 ![]() |
here's the new one (: i kinda like this one better, but it looks a lil crowded. don't you think?
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Yea the extra space is taken up more which is better. I like how you don't add any brushes on top of the images, most people would have. I think the cut out of the images and how you can see all the edges. The quotes are nice too.
Looks better, and still looks great ![]() |
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I like the 2nd one better because its not as scattered, but I like the navigation in the first one a little better.
2nd one is better overall. ![]() Nice job. |
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my lip gloss be poppin. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 118 Joined: Sep 2006 Member No: 460,291 ![]() |
wow, the new version is MUCH better. maybe add more brushes? it seems too...clean.
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 7,149 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 213,509 ![]() |
wow you did so much bettre.nice arranging them
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my lip gloss be poppin. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 118 Joined: Sep 2006 Member No: 460,291 ![]() |
i did kind of liked the navi on the first better tho. but yeah.
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#21
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Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 53 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 284,602 ![]() |
thanks Infinite about the comment on not adding brushes. i felt that it would just make it look even more crowded, and i didn't really want that.
yeeah you all want the old navigation back hehe, but i think i'll leave it like this. so, i'm gonna start coding it and maybe try to get it accepted as a myspace div layout on here. thanks again to everyone for all the comments. |
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#22
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Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 95 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 55,006 ![]() |
I just saw the updated one. I have always like this style. LIke a really neat scraptbook.
The second one looks a lot better, and i really really liked the first. Excellent job! :D |
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![]() (′ ・ω・`) ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,179 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 72,477 ![]() |
I like the second one better, the first one looked like the images were just floating around.
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