A summer's morning, friday september 15th |
A summer's morning, friday september 15th |
Sep 17 2006, 06:31 PM
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I'll paint you a summer's morning
-one that's cool and wet with dew The grass so green you can smell it after all they dance and do- the animals the birds would circle over head and perch within their trees And sing a song to wake the world which brought our traveler to his knees Quietly the traveler rose His brow naked til the end of his nose Chin and mouth capped with a beard of age walking in a sway of to and fro The sun still creeping up in the sky For some time he was silent but eventually he smiled a deeper smile And hummed a tune that seemed to grow The limbs slowly stretched out in wayn and touched his coat The fields gleamed a brighter golden as he passed And as he went he knew intimate peace had come at last Only because he welcomed the truth |
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RiddleMeWonders A summer's morning Sep 17 2006, 06:31 PM
KissMe2408 Wow this is amazing,
It really speaks to me, and ... Sep 21 2006, 09:38 PM
angel_revelation this has great imagery... it's really amazin... Oct 1 2006, 09:25 PM
mona lisa Wow. I agree; wonderful imagery! It's effe... Oct 1 2006, 11:32 PM
RiddleMeWonders i'm going to be editing this one up a bit. Jun 16 2008, 02:02 AM
absinthe Ohhh, nicely written. Jun 17 2008, 07:29 PM![]() ![]() |