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Finished Abstract/Lady Drawing, give me your opinion
xtrancie
post Oct 1 2006, 08:05 PM
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stop staring >_>
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This is the finish version of my unfinish one =)

 
kimmytree
post Oct 1 2006, 08:11 PM
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Are those pastels? Or pencils? I love the variety of colors.

I think the face needs to be more defined. Looks a little flat... needs more deminson.
 
xtrancie
post Oct 1 2006, 08:15 PM
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those are color pencils
 
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post Oct 1 2006, 09:04 PM
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you finished it!
i like it, although the face
does seem rather plain.
But it`s awesome thumbsup.gif
 
Jeng
post Oct 2 2006, 10:37 AM
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colors are greaat, i like the mulitcolorness in the hair,and how you shaded from dark to light
 
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post Oct 2 2006, 12:51 PM
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^ i like that fact too, the yellow face drew me in. very lovely good job!
 
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post Oct 2 2006, 09:40 PM
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Hey you finished it!
Awesome job!


You could of even extended those black swirls at the right side of her face, making them get longer and longer as they reached her chin. Just to kinda add dimension to the face in a weird/abstract view.

But wow, this is wonderful =)
 
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post Oct 2 2006, 09:54 PM
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QUOTE(happykmd @ Oct 1 2006, 6:11 PM) *
Are those pastels? Or pencils? I love the variety of colors.

I think the face needs to be more defined. Looks a little flat... needs more deminson.

yeah, i agree.
there's also something about the eye that i don't like... but i don't know, maybe it's just me. i don't do abstract art; i only do realism.
 
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post Oct 3 2006, 03:16 PM
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yay, it's done! it looks frikin amazing, i love it<33
 

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