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maia's artwork<33, i need some cc
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post Jan 7 2006, 02:43 PM
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ok well here's some of my rough sketches. they're not very sophisticated because i've never taken art classes somethin which i'd really like to do. anyway, constructive critisicm would be nice. flowers.gif they're thumbed


dedicated to hurricane katrina.


ooo me posing here even though it didn't come out like me. haha well i'm very proud of the hand in this drawing and that's all.


emotion sketches


ohmygahhh it's pharrell from i aint heard of that music video. throb.gif
 
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post Jan 7 2006, 02:52 PM
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oO. I really like the first and last one. They're really awesome pieces of art. I don't really like the emotion pieces for some reason..I think it just looks a little doodle-y to me.
 
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post Jan 7 2006, 03:05 PM
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Aww Maia. Youre really good with or without classes. I like the shadings on all of them. Makes me want to share some of my work (:
 
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post Jan 7 2006, 07:51 PM
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I really like them, especially you don't take art classes.
I take art classes and my artwork still sucks.
 
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post Jan 7 2006, 07:59 PM
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hey its good when starting... keep it up.... practice and you will find many ways in drawing an art.... i didn't go to art school or any art classes my self, but im really good at it, i just pick a pencil and a paper then draw... and i even draw in competitions.....

and heres an example, its kinda mesy cause drawn this while replying in this topic... yah, it took me about 4mins... i can draw better if i really give time to what i draw... hehehehe
 
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post Jan 7 2006, 11:04 PM
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They are nice. I like the emotion ones.
Pharrell. throb.gif
 
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post Jan 8 2006, 12:39 AM
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oh, those are all so nice. you have talent *nods*
 
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post Jan 8 2006, 04:53 AM
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their alright,

Stop doing those sketch lines, just make a line. dont go over it tons and tons and TONS of times
 
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post Jul 18 2006, 09:28 PM
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you need more depth and shading.
 
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post Jul 18 2006, 11:01 PM
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honestly, i just think the shading is gnarly.
 
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post Jul 23 2006, 12:45 AM
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I like the whole abstract feeling, but besides that I gett a dark, messy feeling! ermm.gif
 
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post Aug 6 2006, 04:43 PM
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They're so nice! I love all of them, except for the emotion ones. They seem kinda messy for some reason. You are very talented =]
 
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post Aug 9 2006, 03:12 AM
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IMO. You really need to shade the pictures.

You got to add curves on the face.

Make the outfit a bit stylish.
 
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post Aug 9 2006, 08:46 PM
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I like your stuff, keep practicing... I like how you created all the emotions.

Don't be discouraged by what I say.

I think you need to work on shading and depth perception.
 
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post Aug 10 2006, 03:17 PM
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I really like the first one. But I think you need to get more into the shading.. right now to me, it just looks like two shades- white and gray. But jeez. That's really nice work.
 

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