"Sometimes I", Felt sad today |
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| *T0rmented_Soul* |
 Aug 5 2006, 03:07 PM
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Sometimes I feel like I have nothing to give
worthless and unprecious of this life I live Sometimes I feel like no one really cares all by myself with out anyone there Sometimes I feel like I carry everything on these shoulders to prove my existence only to become stronger Sometimes I feel like Im being stared down scolded like a dog who cries and frowns Just one look, Just one smile everything in my life will finally be worth while Take me away, Take me far to heal my pain inflicted by these scars Sometimes I feel like I've never been loved cursed aside by the ones I couldn think of Sometimes I feel as if everything ends alongside my life with these feelings I cant Mend Sometimes I feel like I Just want to die drowning myself in these tears I'll cry Sometimes I feel this ache in my heart torn deep inside as it breaks me apart Just one look, Just one smile everything in my life will finally be worth while Take me away, Take me far to heal my pain inflicted by these scars |
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Aug 5 2006, 03:14 PM
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I can relate. Nice.
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Aug 5 2006, 03:17 PM
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thnx .. Felt a little resentment today and made this poem/lyrics in about 5 mins
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Aug 5 2006, 03:20 PM
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Lost In Stardust Group: Member Posts: 483 Joined: Jul 2006 Member No: 446,335 |
Wow. Hmm mind if i use a few of those lines in a siggy?
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| *T0rmented_Soul* |
Aug 5 2006, 03:21 PM
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be my guest
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Aug 5 2006, 03:41 PM
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Lost In Stardust Group: Member Posts: 483 Joined: Jul 2006 Member No: 446,335 |
Thank you thank you.
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Aug 6 2006, 02:38 AM
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QUOTE Sometimes I feel like I've never been loved cursed aside by the ones I couldn think of Sometimes I feel as if everything ends alongside my life with these feelings I cant Mend Sometimes I feel like I Just want to die drowning myself in these tears I'll cry Sometimes I feel this ache in my heart torn deep inside as it breaks me apart Just one look, Just one smile everything in my life will finally be worth while Take me away, Take me far to heal my pain inflicted by these scars that one touched me. |
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| *T0rmented_Soul* |
Aug 6 2006, 02:41 AM
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thnx bro I'm surprised on how my own work touches me as well.it's like I can feel what others may feel like too
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Aug 6 2006, 02:43 AM
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That's some good stuff Mike.
Only 5 minutes? Probably much better than anything I could write in five minutes. Props. 
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| *T0rmented_Soul* |
Aug 6 2006, 02:45 AM
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lol thnx Jesus I had alot of practice ever since I joined 2 years ago i spent my whole time in this forum and posted topics I wrote so it kinda became a habit of writing things really quick
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Aug 6 2006, 03:03 AM
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aww it made me cry
 very deep and moving. |
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| *T0rmented_Soul* |
Aug 6 2006, 03:06 AM
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thank you everyone
makes me in the mood for writing some more
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Aug 6 2006, 12:53 PM
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My girlfriend read it, i sent it to her through aim. She asked who it was by and i was like this guy from the fourms and she goes nuh uh this is hella good hahaha. Nice job.
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| *T0rmented_Soul* |
Aug 6 2006, 01:31 PM
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^ lol thnx bro I appreciate it.
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Aug 15 2006, 01:14 AM
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nice poem. exactly how i feel right now. :(
if only i can express myself like you |
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| *T0rmented_Soul* |
Sep 5 2006, 12:26 PM
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gyea right on
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