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CUTEBUNNY160
post Jul 31 2006, 10:17 PM
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It is thumbed

C&C please.
It is really crappy and cluttred I know >< but it is like my 3rd collage I believe.
I over did the brushes and...I just don't like a lot of things about it.
 
PrincessAda
post Jul 31 2006, 10:23 PM
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Its not that bad.Pretty good.The things that bother me are those circle brushes especially the one on the right..its really big.You should lower the opacity if you use them.Some pictures are really good choices..some I dislike.For example..the one on the left of her where she`s wearing glasses.And the one on the right of her.You should also make the text a bit bigger.I think if you work on choosing good opacities and brushes,your 4th one will look really nice.Sorry if I`m being too harsh.
 
mocassinsx29
post Jul 31 2006, 10:30 PM
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>_> i don't see anything wrong with it. the brushes/text don't bother me at all but that's just me. and i think all the pics you used work well with the placement. i like it!
 
ohhbiteme
post Jul 31 2006, 11:16 PM
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Hey I like it ^^* It's better than what I can do hah.
 
technicolour
post Jul 31 2006, 11:25 PM
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I'm a meanie. I dont like the brushes. At all. But everything else is awesome.
 
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post Aug 1 2006, 01:55 AM
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^ i agree with kristina 100%
 
Jeng
post Aug 1 2006, 06:39 AM
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i love the collage, great look to it,i agree you did over use the brushes a bit.but the images and cutouts are awesome and the border is nifty too.
 
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post Aug 1 2006, 11:20 AM
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I agree with Kristina, but the image placement is PERFECT. I'd just pick different brushes.
Nice job. thumbsup.gif
 
Ms.ChubbyCheeks
post Aug 1 2006, 11:45 AM
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It's beutifully blended in together. Everything looks like its in its place. The only thing i would suggest is maybe a texture, not loud, but very subtle.
 
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post Aug 1 2006, 11:48 AM
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I dont like it that much, Im not a fan of collages but just try to remember to get arid of the area around the person if its not intended becasue i still see the corners of some of the pictures.
 
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post Aug 1 2006, 12:06 PM
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Love the pictures, not so much the brushes. But great cutouts and placement. :D
 
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post Aug 1 2006, 12:09 PM
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I would say, the colors are cool, also I can see that parts where there are corners... hmmmm to make it better I would suggest removing those, make the flower a solid objest, but remove all the white parts around the flower so it blends intot the picture

erf.. I also don't like the o's swirling around her face
 
turbulent
post Aug 6 2006, 03:49 AM
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Jessica, I luurvve you
and your beautiful artwork
 
Fantasticx
post Aug 6 2006, 06:54 PM
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Its beautil but I dun like the dotted lines i think you used too many . But nice work !

By the way were did you get the flower brushes thx (:
 

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