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Days to Remember
*Freaky Krazer*
post Jul 25 2006, 07:05 PM
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The days of old were nowhere to be found
Where are their beloved memories?
A single hope vanishing in a sad melody
Forgetting the days to remember
Was just pain's way to freedom

Waiting for the sun to rise
At a time when the moon was our only light
Remembering the days to forget
Was only a path to a confounded solitude

Burried deep under the depths of the sea
A serene memory drowning away
The days to remember are nothing now
Lost in a light shaded dream

The melancholic figure engulfed by lies
She will forget the warmth of daylight
A sorrowful smile hides what she has left
Lost in the days to remember
 
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post Jul 26 2006, 06:05 PM
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post Jul 27 2006, 04:39 PM
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QUOTE(Freaky Krazer @ Jul 25 2006, 7:05 PM) *
Forgetting the days to remember
Was just pain's way to freedom


this part was my favorite, it seems so real to me , your a good writer in my opinion who catches alot of points lol good job
 

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