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 May 16 2004, 11:13 AM
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 I have 6 blue blocks :3  Group: Member Posts: 2,248 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 14,959  |
sorry p.p.l. i'm not much of a poet.
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May 27 2004, 03:38 AM
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 fell in love with a boy Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 |
Tell me what you guys think about it... and whatever else. I need clarity.
Tuesday, March 09, 2004 Where does my beginning start after it ends? I'm not angry but I'm not happy. I am not satisfied but I have no hunger. I am nothing simply for the nothing's cause. Laughing at only air, acting if I had a care. Funny misery never came here, with so much to say but no emotion to justify it. I'm a nuetral lifeforce with not or too much juice to handle. I'm a seashell glued to a sandle. I'm a firefly imprisoned by the glow. I'm hazard to uncertain ones who don't know where to go. I'm the parasite of the life everyone lives and I give myself way too much credit for things I want to know. I rave instead of fixing the problem. What problem do I have with people? But I'll never understand because I want to know. Saturday, March 27, 2004 I am a water... I am a song.... I am a daughter.. and I may be wrong about many things But my heart is looking for the right place and I'm trying to keep my cool when I see your face I'm just a shadow of my mind and I make you worry from time to time but in all honesty I don't think you really care. If you asked me about my world could I tell you the truth dear girl? I'm just a image of the lies. Someone you don't recognize without a reminder. Sheriff pulls up to your house walks to the door knocks heavily and wakes your spouse He comes to get you but you just shrug him off... he says "they can't find her" You mumble and you yell, was I really worth the hell, and I stumble back into the light too afraid to live or die. Right now I can't remember what I felt like last december but if I felt a little bit better maybe I could tell you later? I just want something to hold onto... Someone I can belong to. No one knows exactly how hard I havent tried. No one knows exactly how long I havent kept it all inside. Why don't I feel better yet? |
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May 27 2004, 09:36 AM
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these are really good ...
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May 27 2004, 07:41 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,443 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,050 |
i never knew i could rite poems untill i fell in love... some poems i wrote for this girl..............
TODAY I SAW A GIRL WOW SHE IS BEAUTIFUL I GOT TO KNOW HER NAME AND WE BECAME GOOD FRIENDS BUT .... SOMETHING HAPPEN ..... BEAUTIFUL I SAW U TODAY I WAS STANDING NEXT TO YOU ... I WAS JUST THINKING AT THAT MOMENT I WANTED TO SAY HI TO U BUT SOMETHING MADE ME BACK OFF BEAUTIFUL I SAW YOU TODAY JUST AS BEFORE, STANDING NEXT TO YOU THINKING BOY I WISH I COULD HOLD YOUR HAND BEAUTIFUL I SAW YOU TODAY AGAIN. I WAS STANDING NEXT TO YOU YET IT FELT LIKE I WAS A BILLION MILES AWAY FROM YOU, WISHING I COULD JUST GRAB YOU AND HOLD YOU TIGHT IN MY ARMS BEAUTIFUL I SAW YOU TODAY BUT THIS TIME I FELT LIKE I JUST WANTED TO KISS YOU AND HOLD YOU FOR EVA IN MY ARMS BEAUTIFUL TODAY I SAW YOU AGAIN LOOKING BEAUTIFUL THAN EVA LIKE YOU ALWAYS DO, TODAY IS DIFFERENT SOMETHING SO SPECIAL I THOUGHT I COULDNT OF KNOWN WHAT IT IS AT THIS YOUNG AGE BUT I CAME REALIZE I WANTED TO LET YOU KNOW THAT I HAVE FALLEN FOR YOU NOT A DAY THAT PAST THAT I DONT LOOK AT YOUR BEAUTIFUL FACE OR HEAR YOUR SWEET VOICE EVERY DAY THAT PAST MY LOVE FOR YOU GROWS AND GROWS AND MY LOVE FOR YOU BEAUTIFUL WILL NEVA STOP GROWING YOU HAVE TRIPED ME AND I HAVE FALLEN FOR YOU GIRL |
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May 27 2004, 07:44 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,443 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,050 |
heres another one i wrote
SITTING HERE THINKING OF YOU ALL THAT IS GOING THROUGH MY MIND IS THAT I LOVE U SO MUCH SAYING I LOVE U ISNT EVEN ENOUGH BECAUSE MY LOVE FOR U IS SO STRONG I DREAM OF YOU IN MY ARMS BUT THAN I REALIZE IT CANT BE DONE NOW, SO I SIT HERE ALONE THINKING IN PAIN HOW MUCH I NEED THIS GIRL BUT I CANT HAVE HER YET I THINK TO MY SELF HOW MUCH LONGER I MUST WAIT IN PAIN BUT YET HAPPY AT THE SAME TIME IS IT WORTH TO BE WAITING IN PAIN FOR THE TIME TO PAST KNOWING THAT IN THE END WE MIGHT BE TOGETHER? TO ME ITS WORTH IT EVEN THOUGH IN PAIN RIGHT NOW ITS WORTH TO WAIT FOR THE GIRL OF MY DREAMS AND SOMETHING VERY SPECIAL WE CAN SHARE I REALLY DO LOVE HER WITH EVERYTHING I GOT SO I WILL WAIT IN PAIN FOR MANY YEARS TO COME I THINK TO MY SELF WILL SURVIVE THESE 3 YEARS WITH PAIN YES I CAN, THE LOVE I HAVE FOR YOU WILL NOURISH AND KEEP ME LIVING, IN PAIN BUT YET HAPPY AT THE SAME TIME I NEED YOU AND NO ONE ELSE TO LOVE ME I HOPE YOU UNDERSTAND WHAT I AM TRYING TO SAY..... |
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May 27 2004, 07:46 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,443 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,050 |
and another one
If ther were no words If there were no ways talk I would still hear you If there were no tears No way to feel inside I'd still feel for you... And even if the sun refused to shine Even if romance ran out of rhyme You would still have my heart and u would be my sun shine until the very end of time You're all I need and the only one i need All of my life I have been waiting for the right person and now i have found u You've opened my eyes And showed me how to love with out having physical contact, unselfishly, and patiently.... I've dreamed of this a thousand times before But in my dreams I couldn't love you more just one day i hope u will return the love i have I will give you my heart my everything Until the very end of time... You're all I need and the only one i need think i am falling in love with u beautiful |
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May 27 2004, 07:49 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,443 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,050 |
this one is my all time favorite that i wrote but its kinda long
after reading a few of my poems what do you guys think? feel free to use these poems for your special some one just dont say you made it up because it wont be from the heart and you would just be lying to your gf or bf I THINK YOU SHOULD KNOW WHAT I AM FEELING, I THINK YOU SHOULD KNOW WHO NEEDS YOU, DO YOU UNDERSTAND WHAT I AM SAYING? YOU SHOULD KNOW MY LOVE FOR YOU IS TRUE AND THAT U CAN TRUST ME. AM I ASKING U TOO MUCH? AM I BEING SELFISH? IS WHAT I AM DOING WRONG OR IS JUST PLAIN OH CRAZY CAUSE I LOVE U SO MUCH? I WILL WAIT FOR YOU TO THE VERY END OF TIME IF IT TAKES THAT LONG SO SHALL IT BE AS LONG AS I KNOW IN THE END WE WOULD BE TOGETHER ITS WORTH THE WAIT, ALL I NEED IS YOUR LOVE AND YOUR HEART. DON`T YOU KNOW THAT I`M ON MY KNEES, DON`T YOU KNOW THAT I`M BEGGING PLEASE, WON`T YOU LET ME TAKE YOU INTO MY ARMS AND PROTECT YOU FROM ANY HARMS THAT COME IN YOUR WAY TRUST ME BEAUTIFUL NO MATTER HOW HARD I TRY I CAN`T LET YOU OUT OF MY MIND AND IN MY DREAMS I WILL WAIT FOR U TO THE VERY END OF TIME AND LONGER MY LOVE FOR U IS SO STRONG U WILL NEVA BE ERASE AND BE FORGOTON NOR BE REPLACE EVEN IF WE ARE APART, YOU WILL ALWAYS HAVE MY HEART WHEN I MET YOU I KNEW I WANTED US TO BE TOGETHER BUT NOW I WANT US TO BE TOGETHER FOR EVA!!!! I BEEN WAITING FOR THE RIGHT PERSON AND NOW THAT I HAVE FOUND YOU I WILL CONTINUE TO WAIT, EVEN IF IT WILL BE TO THE VERY END OF TIME AND IF MORE THAN SHALL IT BE, LET ME HOLD YOU WARM IN MY ARMS LET ME PROTECT YOU WITH EVERYTHING I HAVE LET ME PROTECT YOU WITH ALL THE LOVE I HAVE FOR YOU. I REALLY WANT YOU TO KNOW, ALL THE FEELINGS THAT I HAVE SO MUCH TO SHOW, HOW MUCH I HAVE BEEN LOVING YOU, NO MATTER WHAT HAPPENS I'LL BE THERE BY YOUR SIDE, IF YOU LET ME HOLD YOU HERE IN MY ARMS I WILL PROTECT YOU FROM ANY HARMS THAT WILL COME YOUR WAY, STAY WITH ME AND I WILL BE WITH U TILL THE VERY END OF TIME AND NEVA HURT YOU!! TOGETHER WE CAN SHARE SOMETHING SO STRONG IT CAN NEVA BE ERASE AND BE FORGTON NOR BE REPLACE EVEN IF WE ARE APART, YOU WILL ALWAYS HAVE MY HEART. I WILL GIVE YOU ALL I HAVE AND EVERYTHING I HAVE, CAUSE YOU MEAN THE WHOLE WORLD TO ME AND EVEN MORE, I WILL LOVE YOU WITH EVERY THING I GOT STARTING FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART AND FOR EVA, AND NOTHING CAN BRING US APART BECAUSE YOU WILL ALWAYS HAVE MY HEART. I HOPE U WILL TRUST ME "BEAUTIFUL" THIS IS HOW I FEEL |
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May 29 2004, 12:29 AM
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 LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
the following work is one i just created and think is awful, but i hope you all like it. i think it's cute
 "something told me" by Lunchbox Something tells me That tonight won’t be the same Something tells me That my life is gunna change Something tells me I’ll be finding something new Something tells me… Something tells me That my fate would misdirect Something tells me That right now is retrospect Something tells me I’ll be finding something new Something tells me I never thought I would find you Something told me what to do Something told me how to be Something told me where to go Something showed me how to see Something tells me The sun just dims that way Dusk is warning Be prepared for something great Or catastrophic Have my senses been woken? I will find the tool That will make me built or broken Something told me where to be Something told me who to know Something told me to be calm Something said go with the flow Something made me so intolerant Something made me criticize Something made me speak my words Something brought you into my eyes Something made me want to stay Something made me realize Something made white out of gray Someone gave me butterflies Something tells me That tonight won’t be the same Something tells me That my life is gunna change Something tells me I’ll be finding something new Something tells me… Something told me where to be Something told me who to know Something told me to be calm Something said go with the flow Something told me what to do Something told me how to be Something told me where to go Something showed me how to see |
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May 29 2004, 07:20 PM
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 Look its... Group: Official Member Posts: 5,817 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,767 |
wow everyones poems are good!!!
i made it into a metapho sun-->God Shine for me Why cant life be this way? Simple, basic, easy I want it to be just how the sun shines out in the sky Were I can just walk by And be me. The sun is just shining, Shining out for me. Calling me to get out and be free. |
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