Letter, to me, it's pretty weird. |
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March 31, 2006 Well, here I am. Writing to myself, because only then will I realize what it all really means later on. If what I'm supposing will be in the future is to be. Hopefully, I'm right. I look at the soft face. So honest, so innocent of loving me. I wish I could be the same. Only full of drowning affection. No doubts, no toxicating fears. You know? The evil things that cause such pain to hit you unexpectedly when you think what you're doing is for the best but turns out not to be. Mm, if I'm not making sense to me, I'm sorry. Anyway, how is it now? Did everything turn out okay? At least fine? The worries get to you? Did you overcome it? Hm, write back soon, please. I really wanna know what's in store for me.
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May 24 2006, 09:12 PM
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 Jake - The Unholy Trinity / Premiscuous Poeteer. Group: Member Posts: 1,272 Joined: May 2006 Member No: 411,316 |
That's nice. I like it. It's very relaxed. When most people use big words they can't get away with saying 'You know?' along with it. I like it alot. It flows. Very nicely done. 10 out of 10.
I'm commenting on yours because I know no body does in the writing topic. Well, what are you going to do, eh? haha. Peace. |
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May 24 2006, 10:08 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 95 Joined: Apr 2006 Member No: 398,023 |
Lol. Yeah, they're not quite active at this forum. :) But thank you for your opinion. Though I'd give myself a lower rating.
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