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| *This Confession* |
 May 9 2006, 11:26 PM
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James blunt one - i dont like it all to much that whole pattern thing over it i don't like on most peoples things i forgot what its really called. its also really dark. so the b&w one on the left doesn't fit in to me...
t-shirt - i really like this one actually probably because i love grunge things.. but i love the design , not so much the font though but i think it fits well. cell division - i dont like this one at all that much sorry..i like the color and the light in some places and the fonts.. but just the actually cells i dont like... far - i like the top part but when you get down to the bottom at the reflection type thing i lose interest in it.. but its still really good i think. circles - their okay.. again i like the colors but not the actually circles things.. bright blue - eh looks like bubbles.. actually i think i don't really like any of your cinema 4d ones..i dont like the colors in this one either.. ..sorry. so sick - oO i really like this one i like the so sick of love songs thing...i like the x's and stuff on it too. good job  purely simple - yea seems to simple to me.. and also to busy in a way abstract randomness - same as the above comment.. how quickly - i love this one.. as well. the grunge i'm telling you i just love it. haha. hmm although i dont like the whole knife thing..but yea it matches the blood looking thing you got.. saying good bye.. - are those lyrics.. if their from this one song i think its from eek i hate it. the song i mean i think a different color choice on this one would have worked better..i dont like the b thing in the corner.. doesn't go with the picture or idea at all.. colorization - good job for your first  silverstein - eee. i love this band and i love the banner. except the swirl thing in the corner..but i think everything else is perfect. colorization again - i think you choose a good picture and it looks extremely good as well city sleeps in flames - eh its okay.. i don't really like it though.. doesn't come to me as a city in flames.. tall building - looks good i like the looking up type thing..colors are good too the note home - eh i don't really like this one.. i think different colors choice would have been nice again..i dont like the tree stuff thing either... Kirby - EEP. Kirby i even have a game i forget what its called though.. but i love Kirby.. or use to ..but i love this i think the font choice was actually good and stuff  feather and tear. - i had to look at this for a min to get it.. i don't think you should have copied the face.. maybe just the one on the left side would have made it look good. but the feather makes me think of how they wrote things and like the person is crying over something that was written.. yea.. anyway overall i give it all around a 7/10 maybe a 8/10 good job hope to see some more stuff. wow that was long.. it should be counted for like 2 posts. jeez. |
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May 9 2006, 11:34 PM
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 I intend to live forever-so far, so good.  Group: Member Posts: 2,820 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,137 |
I have commented on about 99.9% of these in your other posts. My opinion hasnt changed =P
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May 10 2006, 12:08 AM
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 the name is ada. Group: Official Member Posts: 4,688 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 334,608 |
I seen some of the work before..it looks good.
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May 10 2006, 01:16 AM
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 Milo Kamalani Group: Human Posts: 954 Joined: Oct 2005 Member No: 274,798 |
James blunt - I like the pattern and the font.
Shirt design- The brushes and colors are really nice. Cell division- I love this one, the detail is amazing. Far- I like how you reflected the image. Circles- I like the colors, though it's sort of all over the place. I'm not sure where to look... Bright blue- This is beautiful, it reminds me of cotton candy. So sick- Again, I like the pattern. Purely simple- That's not really that simple, lol, it sort of looks like glue or a paint splat. Abstract-y, I like it. Abstract randomness- That's really cool, it looks like it could be an album cover. How quickly I forgot- Creepy, it shows good (well not so good :S) emotion. Saying goodbye- Probably my favorite, though the letter in the corner sort of messes it up. First colorization- Alright for a first, nothing spectacular. Silverstein banner- The jaggedy edges are a gret effect. It's a nice fan banner. Utada hikaru colorization- I like the jeans and the bracelet. City sleeps in flames- I love the colors on this one, reminds me of coffee. Tall building- Minimal, I think it could use more brushes. The Note Home- I really like the font in this one, the colors are slightly off though. Kirby Star Power- Cuuuuute! Feather and Tear- I like this one. The raindrops are great, you should write a tutorial. |
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May 10 2006, 01:53 PM
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 When the sun sleeps. Group: Member Posts: 532 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 289,628 |
Ahh thanx for the critizism(sp?)
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| *StanleyThePanda* |
May 10 2006, 02:33 PM
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James Blunt- The blend itself is good, I dont really like the little square things though.
Shirt design- Looks pretty neat, kind of boring... but its pretty good. Cell division- The image itself is awesome, I love it. I dont really like the fonts though. Far- This looks really neat, I love cinema4d stuff.. I wish I had that program. haha but yeah, I love this one. Circles- This one is really odd, in a good way... kind of reminds me of disco balls? Bright blue- I like this one alot, cause its like this huge thing with all these little ones in it. yeah its good. So Sick- This one is okay... idk if I like the placement of everything. Purely simple- I like this, it looks so spaztic and interesting. Abstract randomness- I like this one too, but I think there should be some color maybe? How quickly I forget- Very awesome, I like it alot, except the word placement is slightly confusing. Saying goodbye- the Y in like = bad. but other than that I like it. First colorization- Good for a first, though, there are some grey areas here and there. Silverstein banner- This looks good. I like it. Utada hikaru colorization- Looks pretty good, still a little grey here and there. but better than the first. City sleeps in flames- Hmm... this is kind of odd.. I think maybe a different color, and I dont really like the beveled effect. Tall building- This is small, but interesting. I like it. The note home- I like this one too, but the colors are a little odd. Kirby star power- Cute, very cute. Feather and tear- I like this one... its very neat. |
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May 10 2006, 03:40 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 7,149 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 213,509 |
QUOTE(mizz_americaz @ May 10 2006, 12:34 AM)  I have commented on about 99.9% of these in your other posts. My opinion hasnt changed =P yup yup i agree.your style is different in a good way. the geather and tear one is new, i think, IONO!!. but ill comment it anyways.i like how the faces glow.i like the border too. hehe.nice colors
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May 10 2006, 04:22 PM
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When the sun sleeps. Group: Member Posts: 532 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 289,628 |
ahh thanx agian and the feather and tear one is like 5 months old..i think.
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May 11 2006, 01:48 PM
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When the sun sleeps. Group: Member Posts: 532 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 289,628 |
New graphic up.
Not to flashy but its what was on my mind at the time like most of my stuff. |
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May 11 2006, 04:37 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,025 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,051 |
^dont double post.
Honestly, I thought the the cinema 4d stuff was all way too rough. A lot of the other graphics were overdone with textures. |
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May 11 2006, 05:10 PM
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When the sun sleeps. Group: Member Posts: 532 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 289,628 |
Eh they were all my first stuff. Not like im that experienced wiht c4d.
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May 14 2006, 05:10 PM
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 Peggy. Group: Member Posts: 2,508 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 214,025 |
Heart Beat- it's okay but I don't like the swirls.
James Blunt- great blending! but what's with that white mark on his yellow shirt? Steezy- I would like it better if the font is blue. Cell division- Very nice! "this will be the end" should be a different font, IMO. Far- it's slightly choppy but I like the background. Circles- I like the colors. Bright Blue- Nice color! So Sick- I like the tone this picture gives me. Purely Simple- Good job! I really like it. But it isn't "pure" enough to call it "purely simple." Abstract Randomness- I think you should colorize it. How Quickly I Forgot- different font please... Saying Goodbye- I would rather want it to be more opaque. And no swirls please! Cameron Diaz Colorization- since I don't like the original already, all I can say is that she looks very pale and the hair color is not natural enough. But it's good for your first. Silverstein- I like the pencil outline. Utada Hikaru- the skin is way better...but did you draw in the eyebrows?  City Sleeps in Flames- Nice effect. Tall Building- I like the effect as well. The Note Home- the font for "The Note Home" doesn't match...and also the blood. Kirby Star Power- Simple, but cute. Feather and Tear- I really like it!!! But I still want to see a matching font. Honestly, I can see that you improved a lot. 
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| *chaneun* |
May 14 2006, 06:12 PM
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I don't like any of them.
The James Blunt one, especially. The pictures don't match. |
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May 16 2006, 08:35 PM
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When the sun sleeps. Group: Member Posts: 532 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 289,628 |
Thanx for the constructive critisim ^
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