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 Apr 27 2006, 08:48 PM
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Night brings Day
BLades with jewels encrusted really just Dew on the Morning grass like fallen stars the droplets Shine In the light of our Star Earth's own Treasure Vault How Fragile. A Gentle breeze from the East the water Falls The Beauty gone A tear Drops to the ground shed for the loss of beauty Instead replinishing the loss another gem in the crowd Another reason to be. |
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austin mcace just want some poem feedback Apr 27 2006, 08:48 PM
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