her break is no fall of rome, picking my pen up again |
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 Apr 22 2006, 11:30 PM
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Her break is no fall of Rome
Her tears are no flood God sends Bring her the paper And she'll write it out for you Sadness was never happier here |
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Apr 23 2006, 12:20 AM
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Wow I loved that a lot! This is one of my favorites.
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Apr 23 2006, 10:23 AM
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 revolution + desire Group: Member Posts: 205 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 284,328 |
so short, simple, and to the point. i adore it. very nicely done.
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Apr 24 2006, 09:30 PM
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 daughter of sin Group: Member Posts: 1,653 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,134 |
Excellent writing.. you said so much with so few words. It's kind of abstract too.. very nice.
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Apr 27 2006, 07:43 PM
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fell in love with a boy Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 |
Thanks so much for your comments!
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