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 Apr 10 2006, 05:48 AM
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 Senior Member  Group: Member Posts: 277 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 172,698  |
Half way through writing my essay, I decided to make something.
OMG NEW ONE Dont like the brushes n stuff...i didnt know what else to use though... |
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Apr 10 2006, 07:44 AM
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 I intend to live forever-so far, so good. Group: Member Posts: 2,820 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,137 |
thats awesome, gorgeous and beautiful. the collage is great! =) lol the font.. the line behind it doesnt match and its too big and noticable. you should change that. make it thinner? and less yellow stroke thingy. besides that its seriously wonderful. loves it
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Apr 10 2006, 08:48 AM
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 yan lin♥ Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 14,129 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,627 |
very nice. I really like the pictures you used.
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Apr 10 2006, 03:36 PM
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 the name is ada. Group: Official Member Posts: 4,688 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 334,608 |
I like the images and choice of brushes.It`s suppose to be a layout right? You should code it.
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Apr 10 2006, 03:49 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 277 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 172,698 |
Oooo, i thought the font was nice, but ill try to find another one.
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| *StanleyThePanda* |
Apr 10 2006, 03:55 PM
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I dont think the swirly brushes under the "coffee anyone" bar part fits. haha
But other than that I like it, there is alot of contrast though. |
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Apr 10 2006, 04:41 PM
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 You'll find me in your dreams. Group: Official Member Posts: 8,536 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 114,010 |
Hm. The sharp end to the bar with "coffee anyone?" on it bothers me. If you could fade it a bit, I think it'd look better. And you might try more retro-y (is that the correct term?) brushes and fonts.
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Apr 10 2006, 05:50 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 7,149 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 213,509 |
i agree with reili, maybe lower the opactiy of the bar whre it says coffee anyone. i liek the images and colors.it looks rgeat.maybe change the postiions of the images a bit.
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Apr 10 2006, 07:06 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 3,055 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 174,796 |
I agree with reili about the bar, and with mizz americas (sorry i don't know your anme) about the font. Othe than that I think it looks AWESOME<3
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Apr 11 2006, 02:13 AM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 277 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 172,698 |
Hmmm, I was thinking of turining it into a layout, but cant code (and cant be bothered to learn :P) so if anyone is willing to code? And im fixing up the colours
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Apr 11 2006, 02:25 AM
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 dont steal my eggroll Group: Member Posts: 528 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,442 |
Thats really good. I like the colors. And thats a very good collage. But the strip with "coffee anyone" feels like it ended abruptly.
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Apr 11 2006, 04:50 AM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 277 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 172,698 |
I editied it, so have alook at it now!!!!!
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Apr 11 2006, 11:57 AM
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dont steal my eggroll Group: Member Posts: 528 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,442 |
I like how the stip fades now
 and the font looks good too 
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| *This Confession* |
Apr 11 2006, 03:57 PM
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yea i agree
it looks better faded. very nice job what are you coding it for a layout for a web site or something like myspace? |
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Apr 11 2006, 04:05 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 277 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 172,698 |
A website layout, if anyone wants to code it, id be veryyy greatful
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Apr 11 2006, 04:06 PM
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 Alice Group: Member Posts: 216 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 10,185 |
I like the left side a lot, but I think the dull brown side is a little boring. It looks weird compared to the big contrast on the left side. Very cool collage.
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Apr 11 2006, 04:10 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 277 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 172,698 |
I think you're referring to the menu coloumn? Its the menu coloumn ;)
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Apr 11 2006, 04:12 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 3,055 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 174,796 |
i still don't really like the font but it's better than the other font
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Apr 12 2006, 09:24 AM
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 My name is really Matt... if you care. Group: Member Posts: 1,442 Joined: Oct 2005 Member No: 258,234 |
blend: 12109/10
font: 2/10 |
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Apr 13 2006, 04:16 AM
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Essay for what, young man?
Oh and that looks cool. However I think all the different little sections are... distracting. Though you don't see me posting anything here do you. So that's good there, bud. Keep it up. Ahem. |
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Apr 13 2006, 09:03 AM
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 3,565, you n00bs ain't got nothin' on me. Group: Official Member Posts: 3,761 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,565 |
that's great! i love the collage, though for me personally it would be too much xD
although.. i dont know, font-wise i would choose a more elegant one. |
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Apr 13 2006, 07:12 PM
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RJL<3 Group: Member Posts: 1,194 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 71,019 |
QUOTE I like the left side a lot, but I think the dull brown side looks weird compared to the big contrast on the left side. Very cool collage. agreed. that collage is hottt. but everything to the right... ehh. i think the brushes and girl in brown are unnecessary. also, the browns dont really go well with the image. the orange color at the top of the collage might be nice though, and some light yellows possibly. and the font.. is too sporty. i'm not good with picking fonts though so i cant help there.  i know thats a lot of suggestions, but i really do love the collage x 1098787. its so retro. |
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Apr 14 2006, 12:49 AM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 277 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 172,698 |
Coool. I dunno, theres a mixed varity of comments about that right side. I like it, so ima keep it. And the font is bad. So, no one is willing to code it?
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