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you had to hurt me
*tahco_monster*
post Apr 10 2006, 06:37 PM
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These tears I cry,
my eyes now burn.
the thoughts to die,
I took a wrong turn.

At the end of this path,
It branches a new.
A new life I'll have,
but not with you.

I gave you my heart,
not just to borrow.
It wasn't too smart,
now I drown in sorrow.

As you drift away,
my spirit grows dim.
my love will stay,
deep within.

You had to hurt me,
you had to lie.
Look can't you see,
these tears I cry.

All the things you say,
I've always took to heart.
Memories seem to fade away,
but I've kept them from the start.

Something in all you do,
always brings me to the light.
Please don't ever be through,
and keep things here all right.

Of all the friends I've met,
I can tell you this is true.
You're one that I'll never forget,
and I'll always be there for you.

I'll be by your side,
When times get rough.
I'll be there for you,
When you've had enough.

I know this world is cold,
But you will be safe with me.
I value you as my greatest friend,
one I'll remember all till the end.



And here is how it ends...


ehh? first poem. c&c appreciated :]
 

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tahco_monster   you had to hurt me   Apr 10 2006, 06:37 PM


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