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 Apr 3 2006, 10:51 PM
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I've become vulnerable. Attached. Baby, you're making me gag. I see you turn the corner and I wanna run, hide, anything. But I stay. All for you. Honey, I'm yours! And I swore I wouldn't be easy this time..but I find myself once more leaning on a fence bound to break. I'm on my balcony again. See how it fits into everything? My balcony, my retreat. Sugar, you're just a dream come true and I'm your nightmare at last. Opposites attract never seemed so..what is it, love? Unfriendly? Pup you don't know the rest of it.
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Apr 4 2006, 02:08 AM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
Your writing has an interesting twist in it that I like.
I hope to see more! |
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Apr 4 2006, 07:54 PM
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QUOTE(KissMe2408 @ Apr 4 2006, 1:08 AM)  Your writing has an interesting twist in it that I like. I hope to see more! no, no more - her writing is so awesome I just can't stop myself from reading.  
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