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 Mar 27 2006, 12:15 AM
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okay, so i've been in photoshop for awhile, but i haven't really *mastered* it so to say. i'm trying a new technique out and yeah. i really haven't been inspired. and these pictures were beautiful and i wanted to do something with them and nothing really looked right but i settled on this.
i just need lots of constructive criticisim. 
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Mar 27 2006, 01:11 AM
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 the name is ada. Group: Official Member Posts: 4,688 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 334,608 |
Thats looks really good.I would move the text somewhere else though.
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Mar 27 2006, 06:30 AM
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RJL<3 Group: Member Posts: 1,194 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 71,019 |
the texture/patterns are really cute! i think its good
 the only suggestion i have is to make the outline of all the pictures the same color. and possibly add a gradient over it all when you're done?
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Mar 27 2006, 08:20 AM
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i don't rele like the choppiness....
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Mar 27 2006, 10:43 AM
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 I intend to live forever-so far, so good. Group: Member Posts: 2,820 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,137 |
^its a collage tho
i agree with xxamandajanexx. a gradient over it all, and maybe another texture? i think that would help because the outline to background change is really noticable. i dunno... its either that or add more pics. well those pics are really awesome! i like em alot. your placement is good and its a really nice collage so far. great job 
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Mar 27 2006, 05:20 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 7,149 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 213,509 |
i in my opinion like it. maybe make the background a bit bigger.. kind of hard to discribe, see how its thin of each one.. maybe thicken it a bit.scratch that,too confusing.nice images and maybe add a few brushes here and there
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| *ranniel* |
Mar 27 2006, 06:39 PM
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QUOTE(mizz_americaz @ Mar 27 2006, 10:43 AM)  ^its a collage tho i agree with xxamandajanexx. a gradient over it all, and maybe another texture? i think that would help because the outline to background change is really noticable. i dunno... its either that or add more pics. well those pics are really awesome! i like em alot. your placement is good and its a really nice collage so far. great job You stole my thought.  awesome job so far. 
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| *Zatanna* |
Mar 27 2006, 06:42 PM
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That's nifty! The text is a wee bit hard to read though, but still, not a biggie at all.
Very nice. |
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Mar 27 2006, 08:01 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 3,055 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 174,796 |
You want critisim?
You got critism......... jk! It looks awesome no critisim here, I love how it's so vintage and you're right the pictures you used are beutiful! |
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Mar 28 2006, 09:32 PM
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 something more Group: Member Posts: 2,468 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,808 |
QUOTE(xxamandajanexx @ Mar 27 2006, 3:30 AM) the texture/patterns are really cute! i think its good the only suggestion i have is to make the outline of all the pictures the same color. and possibly add a gradient over it all when you're done?I agree. Maybe crop the pictures more smoothly. The ictures you chose are awesome. Really, great job. |
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Mar 29 2006, 05:58 PM
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 Milo Kamalani Group: Human Posts: 954 Joined: Oct 2005 Member No: 274,798 |
I don't think the edgy cut outs were done well, but everything else looks great.
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