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so i tried again, another vector
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post Mar 23 2006, 01:12 PM
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i purposely didnt do to many layers cus i saw a vector that was XTREMELY simplified and i loved it

ps. basically ignore the background im just tryin to improve my skills on the actual subject

heres my newest one..
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personally i like it but i do think its a little choppy still and theres sumthi nabout the face that i dont like...
 
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post Mar 23 2006, 01:19 PM
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It's nice and simple! I think there needs to be another layer on the neck though. It's not exactly one color in the shaded areas. Also maybe some details in the hair and eyebrows might be good too. I like how you did the eyeshadow though! Great job ^^
 
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post Mar 23 2006, 07:01 PM
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its actually very smooth flowers.gif not choppy haha its really good. i like the simplicity of it and how you have the shadow on her face. yes maybe more shadows for the next would be good but thats ok. your improving well, keep it up! =)
 
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post Mar 23 2006, 08:38 PM
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ok so im praticing sum more and instead of doin a picture i created a persn here it is...
 
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post Mar 23 2006, 08:56 PM
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^^ that one is awesome.
The simplicity is nice! Smooth and clean.
 
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post Mar 23 2006, 09:14 PM
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I ike the 2nd most.It looks really good.
 
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post Mar 24 2006, 07:56 AM
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The second one is really good, everything about it looks really nice.
 
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post Mar 24 2006, 04:10 PM
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Everything looks pretty good for a beginner just be more detailed.
 
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post Mar 24 2006, 04:35 PM
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so heres my most recent
im working my way up as far as layers go...
every one i do has more layers than the last

but im still having trouble with eyebrows
i cant seem to get them right so i leave them solid
 
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post Mar 24 2006, 05:24 PM
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this one is great, maybe add more layers to the skin.great job though and nice colors and nice job on the hair, youre getting better
 
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i like the last one you posted, yes - vectors go well smooth as possible. but your vexels are getting to be better! thumbsup.gif
 
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post Mar 24 2006, 11:23 PM
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im just gonna keep updateing this post with my newest efforts until i get good
so heres a simplified thingy i did
 
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post Mar 25 2006, 12:19 AM
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give the hair more detail and it woul be a really good one
 
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post Mar 25 2006, 01:33 AM
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give the hair more detail and it woul be a really good one


i didnt want to put more detail i made it thinking of it as a graphic but either way i didnt want more detail in the hair i liked the solid color. if i put more detail in the hair hte i wud have to put more in the face for continuity. nad i like it (the face) the way it was.
 

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