Agh,, I'm writing this on the computer...might not be as good :\ |
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 Mar 23 2006, 11:12 PM
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victim of myspace.com  Group: Member Posts: 395 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,435  |
Yeah...I haven't written this poem yet, I'm gonna start it on the computer. They're always bad :\ EXAMPLE: My "Bitch" poem.
Secrets. Why do we have them? Only to start trouble later? Maybe its the intesity and fun But really what does it come to? Maybe a crushed heart? But yet I still tell them, I live with them And breathe them in. Hey, can I talk to you? Sorry, you can't listen. Its private. Are often heard words. So now all these little secrets Are causing segregation between us, Our group. So now when I do something wrong A friend is blamed because they stick up for me and comfort me. Maybe because they're mad at the person I'm mad at? Why are they mad? A secret. Yes, they are blamed. And now I feel guilty, oh so guilty. Why am I guilty? Because I have a secret. A dirty little secret. And no, I won't tell you. ^^ See???? |
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Mar 25 2006, 01:20 AM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
lol it's not as bad as you think!
I can relate to this, and I like the simplicity of your work. It's very..refreshing. Keep writing! |
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Mar 26 2006, 10:13 PM
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 no news is good news... Group: Member Posts: 123 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 232,063 |
this goes with the theme
"Secrets don't make friends" I liked it. |
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