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 Mar 19 2006, 08:06 PM
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Love drew you in like a freight train
A furnished field brimming with the sun that reflected your eye Baby blue wings of bird They speak of the morning song He carries a steady pace Still as a statue when he listens with ears He takes you slowly like he does with the world And he finds desire in your objections. Oh love took you in with softened hands It caressed you with airy motions When the evening comes you’ll hold onto the morning song. The sky signals the end of love As it touched you with arms wide open The lyrics they left a scar Soon you’ll be singing the morning song. |
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Mar 19 2006, 09:43 PM
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 fell in love with a boy Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 |
Beautiful.
QUOTE(Caitlinnn) He carries a steady pace Still as a statue when he listens with ears He takes you slowly like he does with the world And he finds desire in your objections. Oh, hunny. You're waking me from my writer's block. |
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Mar 20 2006, 08:13 PM
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I like it too. Awesome.
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Mar 22 2006, 05:09 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 621 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 387,078 |
 Thanks Riddle and Ranniel 
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Mar 22 2006, 07:13 PM
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victim of myspace.com Group: Member Posts: 395 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,435 |
Ooooohhh....I liked that alot!
One of my favorite poems =D |
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Mar 22 2006, 07:13 PM
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victim of myspace.com Group: Member Posts: 395 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,435 |
Ooooohhh....I liked that alot!
One of my favorite poems =D |
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Mar 23 2006, 06:21 PM
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 what a moon tonight. Group: Member Posts: 517 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 33,772 |
wow. that was amazing...
I LOVE IT! |
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