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MAeisfromVA
post Mar 4 2006, 03:07 AM
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HERE

its new, i just started it, so its not great, but yeah, what do you think?
 
Elleusion
post Mar 4 2006, 03:55 AM
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Well, to tell you the truth....
It's just an image at the top and then a jumbled mess of stuff below it.
It's too dark, including the image.
You direct linked the image from cB and mygen
And the marquee is very annoying
 
freeflow
post Mar 4 2006, 04:40 AM
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In my opinion some changes should be made:

To your image.
- Next time aim for better quality.
- Make your image make since like you have a picture of you I guess, girls , patterns way to much stuff next time try focussing on either you, the girls, pattern or something else.

Site:
- Layout colors don't really match your image.
- Put music in the table so it looks like everything else.
- The marquee would look better gone.

Otherwise, those are just my suggestions, but maybe better next time, but not too bad.
 
YourSuperior
post Mar 4 2006, 10:23 AM
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I agree with Toya about the banner and the colors not matching. I don't really see any other things wrong, such as major coding problems. Maybe you should try again.
 
Kenado
post Mar 4 2006, 10:33 AM
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Well I agree with Toya w/ the image. Stick to one theme, not 3 different ones, because it really doesn't make too much sense, and it's a bit convoulted. The colors on the site don't interact w/ one another well. Overall it's just an okay job.
 
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post Mar 4 2006, 11:47 AM
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Jeng is pretty right about everything and so is Toya. Don't direct-link from other sites. That's bad.
And by the by, your site looks like crap in Mozilla/Firefox.
 
LuvsDogs387
post Mar 4 2006, 04:52 PM
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- banner adds are annoying and url bothers me, try using geocities instead.
- image is too chaotic. focus on just one element. i notice you have a cartoon drawinging in there too that just doesnt belong.
- blue border around image
- do your friends know their photos are here? it just seems rude if you didn't tell them.
- no comment system
- color scheme doesn't match banner
 
*mipadi*
post Mar 6 2006, 04:47 PM
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Eck. Sounds in webpages are bad.
 
artislife90
post Mar 6 2006, 08:54 PM
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What?
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It looks like a Xanga exploded. wacko.gif

Like others have said, work on a unifying theme, not a jumble of everything you find interesting,
 

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