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post Feb 8 2006, 07:27 PM
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haha ignore the topic title, it was just to lure you all here. This game, is the one where you make as many grammar mistakes as you can, and the person below has to correct you.

This will improve your grammar! How wonderful.

So here's mine:
Me and my friends will going to the park tomorrow.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 07:28 PM
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this is my kind of game

My friends and I will go to the park tomorrow


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I did good at that test.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 07:30 PM
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I did good on the test


Me, Boo, Gotti, and J hood, was at the mall chilling.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 07:32 PM
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NO NO NO NO NO NO NO

YOU FAIL

Boo, Gotti, J hood and I were at the mall chilling.


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Parent's bills is scary.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 07:33 PM
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I did well on the test. _dry.gif

Theirs alot of sad stuff in the world.

edited to add - I totally messed up, thought I was replying to tweeak's first post. I'm a monkey.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 07:34 PM
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Parents' bills are scary.


My sister and me went to my friends's party on Sallys house.

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damnit!

There's a lot of sad stuff in the world.


My sister and me went to my friends's party on Sallys house.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 07:36 PM
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There's a lot of sad stuff in the world.

My sister and I went to a party at my friend Sally's house.


I been hear for a long time.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 07:36 PM
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QUOTE(tweeak @ Feb 8 2006, 4:32 PM)
NO NO NO NO NO NO NO

YOU FAIL

Boo, Gotti, J hood and I were at the mall chilling.
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Parent's bills is scary.
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Isn't it, "Boo, Gotti, J hood and I were chilling at the mall."
I guess both ways are correct.

My parent's bills are scary.
^i think.

There are a lot of sad events in the world. biggrin.gif
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 07:56 PM
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Whoot it's open again! thank youuuuuu.

QUOTE(tweeak @ Feb 8 2006, 4:36 PM)
There's a lot of sad stuff in the world.

My sister and I went to a party at my friend Sally's house.
I been hear for a long time.
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I have been here for a long time.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 07:57 PM
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Will u giv me somethin to proofread?

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post Feb 8 2006, 07:59 PM
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oh yeah, right right.

Me skills is improving for guitar.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 08:01 PM
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My guitar skills are improving.

Yous is very mean. .__.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 08:05 PM
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You are very mean.

QUOTE(Kameko @ Feb 8 2006, 8:59 PM)
oh yeah, right right.

Me skills is improving for guitar.
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I was hoping you'd correct the question I wrote stubborn.gif .


I are smart.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 08:06 PM
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I am smart.

i don't understand what you want o.O

anyways, mine again:
My slow download for torrent angries me.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 08:09 PM
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I wrote: Will u giv me somethin to proofread?
I was hoping you'd correct it! lol

My slow download for Torrent angers me.

Mommy says I special.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 08:12 PM
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Will you give me something to proofread?

there corrected yours, i'll correct the other one now.

My mother thinks I'm special.

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Mine homeworks will be death for me.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 08:13 PM
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My homework will be the death of me.


I want to go on the mall.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 08:16 PM
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I want to go to the mall.

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Stop become racist!
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 08:16 PM
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Stop being racist!

I needs to go outside and enjoyed the fresh air.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 08:17 PM
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Stop becoming a racist..?


I need to go outside and enjoy the fresh air.



That are wrong thing to say" says mom.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 09:13 PM
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"Those are the wrong things to say," said Mom.

I hadn't going to the park with Sally and here friends' in a while said Paul.
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 10:11 PM
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"I haven't gone to the park with Sally and her friends in a while," said Paul.

"fred are two friender than polly!" Liam said,
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 10:13 PM
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"Fred is friendlier than Polly!" Liam said.

Whom brang this back
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 10:53 PM
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Who brought this back?

What is you and your baby gonna do for Valentines Day!
 
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post Feb 8 2006, 11:11 PM
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What are you and your baby going to do for Valentine's Day?
 

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