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razbus
post Feb 25 2006, 04:08 AM
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I just "got it like that".
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I don't know. This definately isn't one of my better works. I think I'm getting writer's block. ohmy.gif

--------Colors--------
a heart beating
faster as it goes
a wisper
a touch
a kiss with eyes closed
a dream awake
as the room turns from white
oh, things will never be the same...

as the colors change.
 

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razbus   Colors   Feb 25 2006, 04:08 AM
ranniel   it sounds good. i see nothing wrong with it, its v...   Feb 25 2006, 11:39 AM
Anielka   Ooh, I like it. From the beginning to "a kiss...   Feb 25 2006, 03:19 PM
xxxSiERRAxxx   Something about it is very...strong I don't kn...   Feb 26 2006, 12:12 AM


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