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post Feb 13 2006, 08:45 PM
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The clouds awakening, winds moving at a high rate//
As god, I believe when nobody else does at the same fate//
I'm on the microphone trying to bring the special effect//
With the power on, it's time to spit, my vocals connect//
Don't get me wrong on this, cuz I do this purely right//
From ages to ages, I became maturely tight//
One day I asked myself if I can accomplish something//
I looked up to the sky and just noticed "One Thing" (1 thing)//
Years later, I walk on the street and see things in a different part//
Had some money in my pocket, bought some bread in the mart//
Hearing guns shooting, sighting the drug dealers hustling//
I felt like I was in a drowning surrounding, that made me feel busting//
Waking up, I can see the birds chirping sitting on the beautiful trees//
I was restless, but man?? It's not like I was deceased//
Couldn't hold my breath for a minute or two//
No emergency dudes, but it felt like my life was over, is it true?//
Jumping ahead of the line was the wrong step to make//
All the recycled memories couldn't be restored for sake//
It feels like the world is beautiful, but all of us be ugly//
And the ugliest people consider the world to be pretty//

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uppin for feedbackzz...
 
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post Feb 13 2006, 08:47 PM
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All the recycled memories couldn't be restored for sake//


:o
i love that line, that was nice jasonn :claps:
 
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post Feb 13 2006, 11:22 PM
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Stop rapping. Try spoken word.
 
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post Feb 14 2006, 12:02 AM
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maybe english isnt your thing..
 
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post Feb 14 2006, 03:53 PM
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QUOTE(BrandonSaunders @ Feb 13 2006, 11:22 PM)
Stop rapping. Try spoken word.
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Umm..that wasn't really a rap? mellow.gif
 
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post Feb 16 2006, 01:19 AM
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That wasn't a rap?? Lol. It should be dude. That flow was HOTT!!
 
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post Feb 16 2006, 01:20 AM
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I just "got it like that".
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QUOTE(BrandonSaunders @ Feb 13 2006, 11:22 PM)
Stop rapping. Try spoken word.
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Oh, and why do you have to be so negative? _dry.gif
 
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post Feb 16 2006, 01:25 AM
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QUOTE(razbus @ Feb 15 2006, 10:20 PM)
Oh, and why do you have to be so negative?  _dry.gif
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Because the guy know's good rap from bad. And, don't double post.

F*ck yeah, I'm finally able to say that.
 
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post Feb 16 2006, 01:27 AM
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QUOTE(Shahin @ Feb 16 2006, 1:25 AM)
Because the guy know's good rap from bad. And, don't double post.

F*ck yeah, I'm finally able to say that.
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I think that I am actually speechless. That was just... retarded.
 
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post Feb 16 2006, 01:29 AM
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^Haha, your a funny person.
 
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post Feb 16 2006, 01:36 AM
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QUOTE(Shahin @ Feb 16 2006, 1:29 AM)
^Haha, your a funny person.
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Respect your elders.
 
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post Feb 16 2006, 01:42 AM
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QUOTE(Retrogressive @ Feb 16 2006, 1:36 AM)
Respect your elders.
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elders? huh.gif lol. I guess you could say that. I have been a cb member since August 2004. wo0t!
 
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post Feb 16 2006, 01:43 AM
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QUOTE(Retrogressive @ Feb 15 2006, 10:36 PM)
Respect your elders.
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Mind your business.
 
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post Feb 16 2006, 01:45 AM
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QUOTE(razbus @ Feb 16 2006, 1:42 AM)
elders?  huh.gif  lol. I guess you could say that. I have been a cb member since August 2004. wo0t!
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Gahahaha, I remember you from way back.

>>Oh and someone slandering another artist is my business. So stop being a jerk.
 
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post Feb 16 2006, 01:48 AM
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^ Please re-read this whole thread. I told him why BrandonSaunders was being negative, because, although I don't know much about Brandon, I know enough about the guy to know that he is a relative connoisseur of hip-hop music. Hip-hop music generally includes rap, which this (no matter what Statistik says) seems to be.

He said my response was retared. I called him funny.
 
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post Feb 16 2006, 01:52 AM
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No, you were insulting. There is a difference between critisim and insulting.
 
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post Feb 16 2006, 01:52 AM
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QUOTE(Retrogressive @ Feb 15 2006, 10:45 PM)
someone slandering another artist
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fall back.. way back
 
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post Feb 16 2006, 01:53 AM
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QUOTE(yo pusha @ Feb 16 2006, 1:52 AM)


fall back.. way back
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pshhhh :P
 
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post Feb 16 2006, 01:55 AM
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QUOTE(Shahin @ Feb 16 2006, 1:48 AM)
... because, although I don't know much,...
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That was enough said right there. laugh.gif

Look man, you didnt need to reply for that guy anyways. That original comment was not directed towards you. Do you make it your business to defend everyone? Hm...
 
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post Feb 16 2006, 02:05 AM
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^ Fixed.

I figured, seeing as how he wasn't logged on, that you'd want a speedier reply.
 
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post Feb 16 2006, 06:36 AM
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oh please people hush... be constructive...

Jason youre getting better...
 
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post Feb 16 2006, 03:55 PM
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you know what??

f**k all you guys giving me bullshit feedback..read the member's guideline for once y'all..stupid ass clowns
 
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post Feb 16 2006, 07:18 PM
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I just "got it like that".
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QUOTE(Statistik @ Feb 16 2006, 3:55 PM)
you know what??

f**k all you guys giving me bullshit feedback..read the member's guideline for once y'all..stupid ass clowns
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Hey, If you would have read the stuff I said, you would see that i was trying to give you a compliment. In fact, I was defending you.
 
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post Feb 16 2006, 08:55 PM
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^stfu and stop being sarcastic ..
 
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post Feb 16 2006, 11:30 PM
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QUOTE(Statistik @ Feb 16 2006, 12:55 PM)
you know what??

f**k all you guys giving me bullshit feedback..read the member's guideline for once y'all..stupid ass clowns
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Lol.


Oh yeah, your getting better, but a lot of your lines don't make much sense. It seems like you know this, and you try to make something out of nothing sometimes.
 

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