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 Jan 25 2006, 04:05 PM
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 Another ditch in the road... you keep moving  Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152  |
as constant as river,
which isnt at all constant and as tall as a mountain which has fallen. you know that when we consider our past, it isnt what we see. or, really, what we feel. its what we learnt and if what we learnt was that sometimes we dont want to know then would we be blissful? ignorant, sure... or have we reached the depths of knowledge? well, as far as im concerned that depth is on top of a tall, tall mountain which has fallen, and been rebuilt |
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Jan 25 2006, 10:26 PM
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Tiffany <3 Group: Member Posts: 192 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 50,685 |
yay
it's okay good, good job |
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| *stephinika* |
Jan 26 2006, 12:57 AM
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hmm, nice. i like it, as usual james.
 i like the end.
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| *torngemini* |
Jan 26 2006, 01:50 PM
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it's very very good!
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Jan 26 2006, 05:26 PM
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 fell in love with a boy Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 |
I disagree with that first comment. It's definitely not "okay"
Your poetry takes a stand and gives an opinion. It's brilliant James. |
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Jan 26 2006, 07:09 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 2,152 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 57,818 |
^Brilliant, I agree.
I read it aloud and I like the rhythm of it. |
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Jan 26 2006, 09:46 PM
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 I love Havasupai Group: Member Posts: 1,040 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 163,878 |
You have the voice of a wise old sage who speaks of enlightenment. Thank you for sharing your wisdom.
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Jan 27 2006, 02:13 PM
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Another ditch in the road... you keep moving Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152 |
thank you all very much for your comments
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