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Seasons Past, another one. my gosh meli!
Fabio.
post Jan 20 2006, 12:21 PM
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I know, I'm really addicted.

Anyhow, I created a layout and a subdomain for my latest story, "Seasons Past." I'm not saying you have to go read it, but... I'd like some feedback on the layout and such.

http://seasons-past.melilyn.com
 
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post Jan 20 2006, 02:29 PM
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oh neat, I like it thumbsup.gif
 
Stephire
post Jan 20 2006, 05:47 PM
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Very cool and original idea.
Err, in the random quote you said "blah blah the look in his eyes was too intensity". Wouldn't the correct term be too intense?
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Other than that, the site is very pretty and very well done.
 
Elleusion
post Jan 20 2006, 06:29 PM
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I like the banner, and the background images of the titles, i love the whole layout in general, it's great!
 
Fabio.
post Jan 21 2006, 12:51 PM
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--"What she saw in his eyes scared her. It was intensity." -Chapter Two

The look in his eyes was intensity. I don't know how to explain it, but it's correct.

Anyhow, thanks!
 
artislife90
post Jan 22 2006, 01:45 PM
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I like the layout, it very clean and organized. Quite the cool concept too.
 

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