Seasons Past, another one. my gosh meli! |
This Month's Contests | Hosts Looking for Hostees | Hostees looking for Hosts | BigBookofResources
Submission Guidelines
![]() ![]() |
Seasons Past, another one. my gosh meli! |
Jan 20 2006, 12:21 PM
Post
#1
|
|
![]() ^ Mrs. Jonas ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 592 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 263,313 |
I know, I'm really addicted.
Anyhow, I created a layout and a subdomain for my latest story, "Seasons Past." I'm not saying you have to go read it, but... I'd like some feedback on the layout and such. http://seasons-past.melilyn.com |
|
|
|
| *StanleyThePanda* |
Jan 20 2006, 02:29 PM
Post
#2
|
|
Guest |
oh neat, I like it
|
|
|
|
Jan 20 2006, 05:47 PM
Post
#3
|
|
![]() Milo Kamalani ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Human Posts: 954 Joined: Oct 2005 Member No: 274,798 |
Very cool and original idea.
Err, in the random quote you said "blah blah the look in his eyes was too intensity". Wouldn't the correct term be too intense? XD Other than that, the site is very pretty and very well done. |
|
|
|
Jan 20 2006, 06:29 PM
Post
#4
|
|
|
:D ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 530 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 337,031 |
I like the banner, and the background images of the titles, i love the whole layout in general, it's great!
|
|
|
|
Jan 21 2006, 12:51 PM
Post
#5
|
|
![]() ^ Mrs. Jonas ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 592 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 263,313 |
--"What she saw in his eyes scared her. It was intensity." -Chapter Two
The look in his eyes was intensity. I don't know how to explain it, but it's correct. Anyhow, thanks! |
|
|
|
Jan 22 2006, 01:45 PM
Post
#6
|
|
![]() What? ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 709 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 92,823 |
I like the layout, it very clean and organized. Quite the cool concept too.
|
|
|
|
![]() ![]() |