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Rising Above From Heartbreak, A simple thought and feelings of mine.
brokenshadow
post Jan 14 2006, 09:05 PM
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Love is pure and simple. Yet so many people seem to confuse it and can't understand. You love someone than you leave them. And for what? Because you don't love them anymore. Or perhaps you never did. You think you love...but do you feel it? Can you honestly look me straight in the eyes and say with your very heart that you love me? Or do you look away...A one-sided love. Too many times this heart has been hurt. Too many tears fall from these eyes. And already too much blood has been shed. Silently dieing from a broken heart...I weep. Love has forsaken me. But I will become stronger than that...and one day I will rise above. And then finally one day look at you and say "I don't love you anymore..." And walk away...free.


~Broken Shadow
 
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post Jan 14 2006, 09:07 PM
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Wow. Thats amazing. I like the last part. Walk away free.
 
azn_at_heart
post Jan 14 2006, 09:19 PM
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some reason i feel alone...guess cus my true self is never shown
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yea it shows many things and y if someone gets a bf or gf then they should noe the person truly loves him/her and should luv the other person as much in return.......<--what i think
 
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post Jan 14 2006, 09:25 PM
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yes that is very deep indeed..and im sure everyone has felt this way once or twice before..i really like how you can express your feelings..hehe ^___^ es muy poetica! i think..iunno *im not hispanic...=] either way i like _smile.gif
 
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post Jan 14 2006, 09:59 PM
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thank you all very much.
 
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post Jan 25 2006, 09:26 PM
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hug.gif I LOVE YOU!!!!

*giggles*
But on a serious note, that was good. Bravo chica
 

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