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 Jan 1 2006, 11:17 PM
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 and they say imitation is flattering  Group: Member Posts: 1,337 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,269  |
I rather like this one...
Mind, I'm pretty new at vectoring... it's not perfect =/ 
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Jan 1 2006, 11:19 PM
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 Yea Yea. Group: Member Posts: 837 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 79,366 |
I can see too many of the layers on the skin. Especially the forehead & shoulders.
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Jan 1 2006, 11:29 PM
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 I love you Group: Member Posts: 194 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 116,447 |
I don't really do vectoring, so I don't have an eye for all the imperfections in them, so I think this is really good. It's not too complicated, but I really like it
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Jan 2 2006, 05:05 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 3,055 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 174,796 |
Forgive for my critism, because I have alot
Eye brows-aren't your eyebrows made of hair? Not just a big blob on each side of your head-texture!! Hair-pretty good. eyes-aren't your eyes the same color? Then so should your vexel's eyes. eyelashes-none, you need to fix that. skin-pretty good nose-it looks like 2 holes sticking out of her face. lips-you need this tutorial-http://www.deviantart.com/view/22403733/ |
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Jan 2 2006, 05:10 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 3,551 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 102,857 |
You defintely need a lot more layers to define the cheeks, nose and the depth. The shading on her body isn't so great. Try filters maybe. And I agree about the eyes try making the the same color. And the lips are choppy. For a first I guess it's okay. You just need a lot more layers ot make it more detailed.
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Jan 2 2006, 05:35 PM
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 the name is ada. Group: Official Member Posts: 4,688 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 334,608 |
It scared me at first! *gasp* but its nice.
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Jan 2 2006, 05:57 PM
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 hello : ) Group: Official Member Posts: 4,227 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,139 |
Perhaps the idea was more aimed towards an abstract type vector.
If that's the case then it's pretty good. I would say I just don't like that her eyes are two different colors. |
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Jan 2 2006, 06:07 PM
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 Peggy. Group: Member Posts: 2,508 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 214,025 |
What I can say is pretty good, but not detailed enough. Perhaps more shading . The eyes are different colors, which I find it werid.
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Jan 2 2006, 06:11 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 2,534 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 170,127 |
QUOTE(M1SSxCHR1SSY @ Jan 2 2006, 2:57 PM) Perhaps the idea was more aimed towards an abstract type vector. If that's the case then it's pretty good.  Yeah, I think you guys are so set on 'realistic' vectors you can't see it for what it really is, digital art.. Abstract digital art. I like it, it's very good. I like your 'style' used on it :). |
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Jan 2 2006, 07:33 PM
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 young enough to not give a f*ck Group: Member Posts: 1,149 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 35,060 |
the shoulders look like wood.
lol. but i wouldnt ay anything, cause i dont even know how to vect or know the techniques of it. & the neckalces look cool.  |
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Jan 2 2006, 07:53 PM
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 I intend to live forever-so far, so good. Group: Member Posts: 2,820 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,137 |
when you make your shapes, work from the outside in. you cant have random shadows in the middle of the skin. gradually start from the outs then make your shapes continuing out from there. using more layers will help you define the features alittle better.
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Jan 2 2006, 07:58 PM
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 My peanut. Group: Member Posts: 948 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 187,456 |
I dont like it... I dont like vectors at that... [picnch]
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Jan 3 2006, 04:10 PM
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Newbie Group: Member Posts: 1 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 332,625 |
I think it's wonderful. You're new and you'll develop more shading in time. I think all of these people would have made a suggestion AND a compliment, but they were all rude. Whatever floats their boat to make themselves feel better. I love that the eyes are two different colors, it makes it different.
 My friend's eyes are like that. But my absolute favorite part is the necklace. I bet that took forever!!!  Anyway, I think it's a wonderful start, keep up the good work!!
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| *StanleyThePanda* |
Jan 3 2006, 04:12 PM
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QUOTE(RupertGrintluvr15 @ Jan 2 2006, 7:58 PM) I dont like it... I dont like vectors at that... [picnch] If you dont like vectors, then why comment? Anyways, its okay, read up on some more tutorials Lots of shading is good......more shading everywhere... |
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Jan 3 2006, 09:13 PM
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 team late night queen Group: Member Posts: 1,602 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 2,861 |
i like the style you put into this. very abstract.
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| *chaneun* |
Jan 3 2006, 09:35 PM
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it looks really.. i dunno. um, the edges arent that smooth
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Jan 5 2006, 04:13 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 558 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 102,872 |
wow, better than I could ever do.
Love the hair, and the right eye. lol |
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Jan 6 2006, 10:27 PM
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and they say imitation is flattering Group: Member Posts: 1,337 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,269 |
QUOTE(skp86 @ Jan 2 2006, 5:05 PM) Forgive for my critism, because I have alot Eye brows-aren't your eyebrows made of hair? Not just a big blob on each side of your head-texture!! Hair-pretty good. eyes-aren't your eyes the same color? Then so should your vexel's eyes. eyelashes-none, you need to fix that. skin-pretty good nose-it looks like 2 holes sticking out of her face. lips-you need this tutorial-http://www.deviantart.com/view/22403733/ Actually, that's how the eyes were in the picture. Thanks for the criticisms and compliments and such =] And, yeah, I really hate the shoulders o.O |
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