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 Dec 30 2005, 04:33 PM
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 Senior Member  Group: Member Posts: 132 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 305,184  |
i dont like how the y covers her chin but whatever
after  before  ok people are saying it too bright so i toned it down wat do you think? ***edit*** 
This post has been edited by eltriksodapop: Dec 31 2005, 09:20 PM |
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Dec 30 2005, 04:36 PM
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t-t-t-toyaaa Group: Official Member Posts: 19,821 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,270 |
She's a little too yellow. It sort of looks like you missed alot of parts of the hair also. Try to make her look more natural.
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Dec 30 2005, 04:37 PM
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 the name is ada. Group: Official Member Posts: 4,688 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 334,608 |
It`s nice.Just her skin is just like said above..a little too yellow.other than that you did GREAT
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Dec 30 2005, 04:38 PM
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 when you smile, i melt inside Group: Member Posts: 1,325 Joined: Oct 2005 Member No: 267,089 |
QUOTE She's a little too yellow. It sort of looks like you missed alot of parts of the hair also. Try to make her look more natural. agreed. |
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Dec 30 2005, 04:39 PM
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I agree w/ toya it's a bit too yellow. Try doing a real colourization, it will look a lot better then this (no offence)
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Dec 30 2005, 04:45 PM
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 You'll find me in your dreams. Group: Official Member Posts: 8,536 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 114,010 |
If you're going to mess with contrast, then use darker pictures. It'll end up better in the end. And if you didn't like the "y" on her chin, then why didn't you move the text over? o.0 That was slightly stupid of you. Also, choose text colors that go with your colors, white&pink doesn't really flow here. You should also have just one title for a piece, the Alexis Bedel should be smaller and say something like "ft. Alexis Bedel". And your copyright shouldn't be so apparent, it distracts from the actual artwork. Ever noticed that the signatures of artists are always really small and tucked away in a corder? Apply the same concept to your digital artwork.
(P.S -> Did you know you can take the stroke off the text? It makes it look better.) |
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Dec 30 2005, 04:48 PM
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 young enough to not give a f*ck Group: Member Posts: 1,149 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 35,060 |
i dont think i like it.
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Dec 30 2005, 05:11 PM
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 who ma bitch? you ma bitch, bitch. Group: Member Posts: 1,920 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 55,278 |
QUOTE(fishcake-y @ Dec 30 2005, 1:45 PM) If you're going to mess with contrast, then use darker pictures. It'll end up better in the end. And if you didn't like the "y" on her chin, then why didn't you move the text over? o.0 That was slightly stupid of you. Also, choose text colors that go with your colors, white&pink doesn't really flow here. You should also have just one title for a piece, the Alexis Bedel should be smaller and say something like "ft. Alexis Bedel". And your copyright shouldn't be so apparent, it distracts from the actual artwork. Ever noticed that the signatures of artists are always really small and tucked away in a corder? Apply the same concept to your digital artwork. (P.S -> Did you know you can take the stroke off the text? It makes it look better.)  ditto and i dont like it at all 
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Dec 30 2005, 05:16 PM
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 HAAAAAAAA. Group: Member Posts: 4,472 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 75,068 |
It's too bright.
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Dec 31 2005, 01:24 PM
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 Call me C.Annie Group: Member Posts: 366 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,994 |
Ahhh ... to bright for my eyes. Other than that, its alright.
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Dec 31 2005, 02:55 PM
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 I love you Group: Member Posts: 194 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 116,447 |
I agree with some of the other people when they say that her skin is a little bit too yellow
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Dec 31 2005, 03:22 PM
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 Yea Yea. Group: Member Posts: 837 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 79,366 |
I don't like what you did because I really think the original was pretty with her blue eyes. Pick a photo that has crappy colors next time.
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Dec 31 2005, 09:21 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 132 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 305,184 |
QUOTE(ilauqh @ Dec 31 2005, 4:22 PM) I don't like what you did because I really think the original was pretty with her blue eyes. Pick a photo that has crappy colors next time. i fixed the blue so it still has the natural-ness of her eyes |
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Dec 31 2005, 09:22 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 132 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 305,184 |
QUOTE(fishcake-y @ Dec 30 2005, 5:45 PM) If you're going to mess with contrast, then use darker pictures. It'll end up better in the end. And if you didn't like the "y" on her chin, then why didn't you move the text over? o.0 That was slightly stupid of you. Also, choose text colors that go with your colors, white&pink doesn't really flow here. You should also have just one title for a piece, the Alexis Bedel should be smaller and say something like "ft. Alexis Bedel". And your copyright shouldn't be so apparent, it distracts from the actual artwork. Ever noticed that the signatures of artists are always really small and tucked away in a corder? Apply the same concept to your digital artwork. (P.S -> Did you know you can take the stroke off the text? It makes it look better.) i toned the brightness down and i also fixed the title |
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Dec 31 2005, 09:29 PM
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 My peanut. Group: Member Posts: 948 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 187,456 |
ickk.. I like the second one better.. but not the lips.
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Jan 1 2006, 12:02 AM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 132 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 305,184 |
^ thanks i guess i prefer the second one too
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Jan 1 2006, 07:45 AM
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 say maydayism. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,447 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 26,344 |
I like both versions of it
 ... but the title doesn't really seem to match. She looks as if she has loads of makeup on.
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Jan 1 2006, 07:29 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 56 Joined: Jan 2006 Member No: 340,203 |
nice job...i prefer the 2nd one
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Jan 1 2006, 09:06 PM
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 ^ignore. read> Maria. Group: Member Posts: 710 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 323,799 |
the editted version is real nice. good job!
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