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post Dec 26 2005, 11:37 PM
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i'll re-showoff my first one since i've given it a major facelift since

http://www.xanga.com/albinotech

take note of the last table in the menu with the digg news. i got it working to display my feed real time ^-^ (as for some reason the default code the site regularly gives you doesn't work on xanga)

and http://www.xanga.com/ilovechristie

it's supposed to be real simple, as i use it as my personal blog. i whipped it together real quick but i thought it worked out pretty nice.
 
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post Dec 27 2005, 04:12 PM
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yea.....
the first ones nice its just too...... bland?
the second is so simplistic that I wanted to barf on it but I figured it would be useless because the phlem would blend into your layout. YOu realy need to add somthing to the backround of it or maybe put in some modules.
 
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post Dec 27 2005, 08:45 PM
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QUOTE(drilotedahl @ Dec 27 2005, 4:12 PM)
yea.....
the first ones nice its just too...... bland?
the second is so simplistic that I wanted to barf on it but I figured it would be useless because the phlem would blend into your layout. YOu realy need to add somthing to the backround of it or maybe put in some modules.
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a little to harsh there I believe, lol. i find the simplicity pretty cool. good job
 
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post Dec 27 2005, 10:12 PM
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the first ones nice its just too...... bland?

I don't know either, way to be specific.

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YOu realy need to add somthing to the backround of it or maybe put in some modules.


sim·ple (sĭm'pəl)
adj., -pler, -plest.

1. Having or composed of only one thing, element, or part. See synonyms at pure.
2. Not involved or complicated; easy: a simple task. See synonyms at easy.
3. Being without additions or modifications; mere: a simple “yes” or “no.”

don't worry the orb x, his post gave me something to snicker at for a while.
 
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post Dec 28 2005, 09:04 PM
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i don't see the significance in either layout. they're way too simple to even be called a skin. your banner is a picture with text. nothing special on that. and so is your other layout. simple coding and simple imaging. it just looks dead. a default xanga seems much more appealing than this.
 
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post Dec 28 2005, 09:50 PM
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You know what guys - you are being WAY too harsh - now, I like them. Now, they are too simplistic for submition, but sometimes simplicity is nice. Now for the critique...

I love your idea on the first one (and Tifa's way cool) - however there seems to be a lot of empty space. Perhaps but a repeating background behind the blog/nav to pull the design together and separate it at the same time. OOOooooooo~ I just refreshed it - SONIC IS FREAKING AWESOME!... brings back childhood memories. New banner on refresh... I like it.

The second one - I love the banner, and the color scheme is great (I noticed the slightly darker color on the top - I love it!) Perhaps you need to blend a little of the 1st blog into the second - try creating a subtle pattern in the background and putting something behind the blog date headers - I think they shouldn't stand alone like that.

Great job - I love your taste - simple is definitely good. You took it too a new level. Default is simple, boring, and unoriginal. Yours is simple, but creative, and interesting!
 
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post Dec 28 2005, 10:48 PM
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QUOTE(digital.fragrance @ Dec 28 2005, 10:50 PM)
You know what guys - you are being WAY too harsh - now, I like them.  Now, they are too simplistic for submition, but sometimes simplicity is nice.  Now for the critique...

I love your idea on the first one (and Tifa's way cool) - however there seems to be a lot of empty space.  Perhaps but a repeating background behind the blog/nav to pull the design together and separate it at the same time. OOOooooooo~ I just refreshed it - SONIC IS FREAKING AWESOME!... brings back childhood memories.  New banner on refresh... I like it.

The second one - I love the banner, and the color scheme is great (I noticed the slightly darker color on the top - I love it!)  Perhaps you need to blend a little of the 1st blog into the second - try creating a subtle pattern in the background and putting something behind the blog date headers - I think they shouldn't stand alone like that.

Great job - I love your taste - simple is definitely good.  You took it too a new level.  Default is simple, boring, and unoriginal.  Yours is simple, but creative, and interesting!
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simple is simple, you can't take it to a new level
-it doesn't stand out is what i'm trying to say
both layouts are simple, and the second one, yea
well w/e, everyone is entitled to their own opinion
 
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post Dec 29 2005, 03:26 AM
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QUOTE(critiquing is good @ Dec 28 2005, 9:04 PM)
your banner is a picture with text. nothing special on that. and so is your other layout. simple coding and simple imaging


actually in your context, every banner is a picture with text. who says you have to sully up an image for it to qualify as a banner. i think if the source image isn't worth being displayed alone, you should'nt bother working with it in the first place. you know another site that is simple and works effectively?


the stroke and curved border worked for me. and you have no business bringing up my coding. i had to end up rewriting a lot of the source coding sites gave (like the digg feed and polling section) and find out which ones had to be run through decrypters to work, let alone rewrite the whole menu. you'll be hard-pressed to find dropdowns like that or a page with a game that ends up loading as fast as mine. if you're serious about my coding being subpar i would really love you linking some examples of first time good backbone.

thanks for the constructive comments, digital.fragrance. i was starting to lose hope for this place wacko.gif
 
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post Dec 29 2005, 03:55 AM
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I favor your simple 1st site. I mean it, it's really great, no problem at all. Believe me.

Your 1st background is darn awesome. Where did you get that?




Hey drilotedahl, i know his layout are not your taste because you seem to hate simple layout .. eh ? You know what, your offical membership should be taken away. Wanna know why? It's less than 5ppd. I really think people like you dont deserve this type of membership features. Good bye, incoming ex-official member. Have fun.

and as for you fellow member, critiquing is good. what's up w/ your screename?
 
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post Dec 29 2005, 11:37 AM
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QUOTE(emotaku @ Dec 27 2005, 9:12 PM)
I don't know either, way to be specific.
sim·ple (sĭm'pəl)
adj., -pler, -plest.

  1. Having or composed of only one thing, element, or part. See synonyms at pure.
  2. Not involved or complicated; easy: a simple task. See synonyms at easy.
  3. Being without additions or modifications; mere: a simple “yes” or “no.”

don't worry the orb x, his post gave me something to snicker at for a while.
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Ok your fist one isn't that bad now that I noticed the refresh banner, but the image quality on the sonic one needs to be improved.

The second one needs somthing like a double border for the blog or maybe you coul change the color of the blog and make it look accented.

oh and one more thing

ir·ri·tate ( P ) Pronunciation Key (r-tt)
v. ir·ri·tat·ed, ir·ri·tat·ing, ir·ri·tates
v. tr.
To rouse to impatience or anger; annoy: a loud bossy voice that irritates listeners. See Synonyms at annoy.
To chafe or inflame.
Physiology. To cause physiological activity or response in (an organ or tissue), as by application of a stimulus.

v. intr.
To be a cause of impatience or anger.


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[Latin irrtre, irrtt-.]
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irri·tating·ly adv.
irri·tator n.

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bitch ( P ) Pronunciation Key (bch)
n.
A female canine animal, especially a dog.
Offensive.
A woman considered to be spiteful or overbearing.
A lewd woman.
A man considered to be weak or contemptible.
Slang. A complaint.
Slang. Something very unpleasant or difficult.

v. Slang bitched, bitch·ing, bitch·es
v. intr.
To complain; grumble.

v. tr.
To botch; bungle. Often used with up.
( I didn't mean this one I just wanted to prove a point)
 
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post Dec 29 2005, 05:50 PM
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thats a simple useful site, your site isn't useful, the least you can do with it is make it look nice, jackass...
just quit it, noone wants to fight here. go shove that screenshot up your ass and admit you didn't do a good job on these layouts, god.....stupid ass people these days...
 
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post Dec 29 2005, 06:15 PM
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QUOTE(critiquing is good @ Dec 29 2005, 5:50 PM)
just quit it, noone wants to fight here. go shove that screenshot up your ass


laugh.gif i love the hypocrisy. since you're not up for a real debate and continue to throw your opinion-biased jabs i'll pretend you just quit.

thanks for the definitions, drilotedahl. i needed some help describing some people on here.
 
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post Dec 30 2005, 11:19 AM
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Everyone needs to clean up your act (and you know who you are) - I can't believe you guys - cussing, name calling - what's happened here? There is no excuse for this. cB isn't like this, and I'm positive this isn't allowed. I thought better of some of you.
 
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post Dec 30 2005, 12:21 PM
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QUOTE(digital.fragrance @ Dec 30 2005, 10:19 AM)
Everyone needs to clean up your act (and you know who you are) - I can't believe you guys - cussing, name calling - what's happened here?  There is no excuse for this. cB isn't like this, and I'm positive this isn't allowed.  I thought better of some of you.
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She wasn't talking about me................

also your layout dosn't work realy well at an 1024 resulution just thought you would like to know............
 
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post Dec 30 2005, 12:36 PM
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QUOTE(drilotedahl @ Dec 30 2005, 12:21 PM)
She wasn't talking  about me................

    also your layout dosn't work realy well at an 1024 resulution just thought you would like to know............
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......

I have a 1024 x 768 res and it works fine - I use IE, if that's the problem.
 
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post Dec 30 2005, 12:49 PM
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^maybe because im using firefox at the moment
 
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post Dec 30 2005, 12:50 PM
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digital fragrance you have so many animations it loads slow even on a T1 connection, and also on firefox your page doesnt line up. Your design would kickass if it lined up and didnt have so many animations.
 
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post Dec 30 2005, 12:54 PM
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Yeah, but this thread isn't about me - so let's continue this somewhere else.
 
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post Dec 30 2005, 02:01 PM
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Nice layout on the first one. Actually one of the best I've seen for a text intensive layout with plenty of space for graphics. The negative space or "empty space" is as important as anything else and is a design element itself. The November 18th post is chilling. Thanks for the reminder. The hovers are a nice touch too.
 
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post Dec 30 2005, 07:06 PM
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I'm not a big fan of the banner on the first one with the girl (it doesn't carry a message as much as the others), but I love the sonic and christie banners. On the second layout, I think you could've done more with the colors and the way you designed your blogbody; still keeping it simple, but playing with the colors to enhance the look of your banner. The first layout still feels a bit default-y, like you got rid of a few borders and threw on a header pic, but that's just me.
 
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I like the second one, very cute. The first one to me is too bland. though I still like it.
 
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post Dec 30 2005, 08:17 PM
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I noticed something else too....... you need to color your scrollbar.
 
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post Dec 30 2005, 10:47 PM
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QUOTE(digital.fragrance @ Dec 30 2005, 8:19 AM)
Everyone needs to clean up your act (and you know who you are) - I can't believe you guys - cussing, name calling - what's happened here?  There is no excuse for this. cB isn't like this, and I'm positive this isn't allowed.  I thought better of some of you.
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Since you said "some of you", does that means me too ? wink.gif
 
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Not at all - the people I was talking about know who they are.
 
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post Dec 31 2005, 12:33 AM
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QUOTE(destructo-girl @ Dec 30 2005, 7:06 PM)
The first layout still feels a bit default-y, like you got rid of a few borders and threw on a header pic, but that's just me.


actually i removed the default menu and what you see there is a whole rewritten one. guess i should've spruced it up more whistling.gif i went for a more useable than eye gouging look, the last thing i want is to resort to animated gifs or transparencies or something.

scrollbar wasn't a big concern for me, drilotedahl, since i use firefox it wouldn't've shown up. i think that kind of modification is pretty tacky anyway.
 

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