Tell me your name, And I'll tell you a story |
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 Dec 21 2005, 02:52 AM
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Senior Member  Group: Duplicate Posts: 459 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 308,469  |
Tell me your name and I'll tell you a story
It begins with a man looking out the window Yes, this story is about me, and its about you too I saw you out in the court yard while I was in class My note book was out, but instead of notes I wrote this short story so I can slide it in your locker Now that you've read this story, please Tell me your name |
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Dec 21 2005, 05:18 PM
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that's adorable. especially this part:
QUOTE Tell me your name and I'll tell you a story that was really unique. i like the concept and how it's just short and sweet. keep it up! |
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Dec 21 2005, 09:01 PM
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I like the first and the last line. Good job, keep up the good work. =]
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Dec 21 2005, 10:13 PM
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 Food. Group: Member Posts: 667 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 112,545 |
Nice. The "tell me your name and I'll tell you a story" sounds familiar..
I swore I've heard it before. Edit | Yeah, 'Misfit' by Elefant. |
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Dec 22 2005, 03:45 AM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
Ah, that's great =) I loved it.
"Now that you've read this story, please Tell me your name. . ." Awesome =) |
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Dec 22 2005, 03:15 PM
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 can't touch this Group: Member Posts: 174 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 323,184 |
Wow, I love it. It's got a lot of emotion, and yes, the first and last lines are the best.
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Dec 22 2005, 06:52 PM
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Senior Member Group: Duplicate Posts: 459 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 308,469 |
QUOTE(The Corpse Bride @ Dec 21 2005, 10:13 PM) Nice. The "tell me your name and I'll tell you a story" sounds familiar.. I swore I've heard it before. Edit | Yeah, 'Misfit' by Elefant.  i dont know who elefant is. i like elephants though. sorry for unintended copy of a line. great elefants think alike i guess. i dont know, when i wrote the first line i was actually thinking about Wonder Years, when the theme song started out with "lend me your ear and i'll sing you a song"... or something like that. |
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Dec 27 2005, 01:29 PM
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 I'll be your Rock N Roll Queen Group: Member Posts: 68 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 324,951 |
It's something new
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