Irresistible Impulse, poem about someone with OCD |
| *NatiMarie* |
 May 15 2004, 08:50 PM
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Irresistible Impulse
by NatiMarie I think it may be too soon to let this love I have for you expand to reach the depths of the ocean’s salty waters. I think it is starting to hurt me. The struggle in finding ways for you To reach your heart into mine and let it grasp it tight. I think I’m going fanatical. The way I repeat your name in the exact same tone and pitch that if I mess up I have to say your name once more again. I think I’m growing obsessive. To write your name 100 times in a little blue book the size of a post-it, in both cursive and print, interchangeably. I think I’ve gone too far into loving you. To not care if you say hi to me and ignore me that I start blaming myself of my stupidity. I think I don’t love you. The way I feel more hate for you when I can’t get you to notice me. I think I have to let my hands free of tension. The way I grasp my hands so tight together when I see you kissing somebody else that I start sweating and hating you. Maybe I should just stop thinking. To let this craziness control my life isn’t normal. Maybe you’re just my obsession. A part of me that I cannot let depart from where I have placed you in my soul and in my heart. --This poem is based on someone who has OCD, sadly, in some circumstances can this disorder be controlled. |
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May 16 2004, 01:38 AM
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 Feeel X  Group: Member Posts: 2,814 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 1,498 |
did you write it?
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May 16 2004, 11:11 AM
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 I have 6 blue blocks :3 Group: Member Posts: 2,248 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 14,959 |
nice!
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May 17 2004, 04:42 PM
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wow! nicely done!
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| *NatiMarie* |
May 17 2004, 05:51 PM
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Thanks for the comments. I wrote it because after I read a book called Kissing Doorknobs, it made me realize what the effects that disorder can have on people. Sometimes it's hard to resist some anger inside, but the person continues to pursue a certain thing although it hurts them. The book is really good. I highly recommend it.
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May 17 2004, 07:32 PM
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Feeel X Group: Member Posts: 2,814 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 1,498 |
QUOTE(NaTiMaRiE @ May 17 2004, 5:51 PM) Thanks for the comments. I wrote it because after I read a book called Kissing Doorknobs, it made me realize what the effects that disorder can have on people. Sometimes it's hard to resist some anger inside, but the person continues to pursue a certain thing although it hurts them. The book is really good. I highly recommend it. wow you wrote it? it seems so professional. |
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| *NatiMarie* |
May 17 2004, 09:23 PM
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thanks faithin_felix
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Jan 12 2005, 01:41 AM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
Whoa!
That's awesome, Natf00! I have OCD. ;o Yes. I totally brought back an old topic.
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Jan 17 2005, 01:15 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 42 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,705 |
GOOD GOOD GOOD
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Jan 29 2005, 07:20 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,634 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,631 |
wow it's really goood :)
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