Song (Still Working on It), "You're Right" |
Song (Still Working on It), "You're Right" |
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![]() Sunlight--shine on me. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 433 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 149,201 ![]() |
K SO I recorded a new song and I know a lot of people have already heard it...but It's about this guy I like...anyway...here it is
You're Right opinions? Comments? I think i've improved a little ![]() It's kind of short right now....I'm working it out. It doesn't have brilliant lyrics and its only piano and voice right now. My brother (drums), the guy (piano), and some other people are gonna sit down together and jam and write out stuffffff ![]() I'm not sure how that's gonna go down...ANYWAY LISTEN TO ITT!! haha <33 |
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![]() Yawn ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 ![]() |
hey, you have a really pretty voice :) And yes, I've think you've improved since your last song. Nice job with this :) You keep writing and singing.
Oh and make another one of your movies, kinda like how you did with the "Peter Pan" one. lol I still remember that. |
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*mzkandi* |
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Very nice, I like your voice.
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![]() Bay Area YadadaDiiiig. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 4,249 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 103,202 ![]() |
You have a really pretty/nice voice. The lyrics are nice. But it sounds like your voice is coming from your throat, sort of chesty, but you cant tell really that much.. Work your voice from your diaphragm, and open your mouth in length, not in width.
I like how you have your voice echoing you. |
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![]() you`re undeniable ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,136 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 283,828 ![]() |
it's really pretty/cute. i love your voice, and especially the echos. so pretty.
![]() i think the only thing is how at points when you make your voice loud, it seems kind of sudden, like you are randomly shouting into the microphone... maybe if it was more of a crescendo? anyway, 100000000x times better than i could ever do. |
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![]() i've never wanted anything rationale. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 8,449 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 19,045 ![]() |
QUOTE(Hiphop d[-_-]b @ Dec 11 2005, 11:48 PM) You have a really pretty/nice voice. The lyrics are nice. But it sounds like your voice is coming from your throat, sort of chesty, but you cant tell really that much.. Work your voice from your diaphragm, and open your mouth in length, not in width. I like how you have your voice echoing you. Agreed. It is a really cute song. I like your voice. |
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![]() when you smile, i melt inside ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,325 Joined: Oct 2005 Member No: 267,089 ![]() |
aw, good job, i really like your voice.
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![]() Word. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 3,004 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 34,673 ![]() |
what exactly is gonna happen with this song? are u making a band or something?
sounds pretty good but it just needs some work.. vocally. i don't see how u can add drums and guitar to this... if you can master them in.. it would sound really awesome.. idk.. i don't think that sound could sell to alot of people... but anyways, what do i know.. i'm not musically talented.. i just watch alot of local bands play at local venues... |
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