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Song (Still Working on It), "You're Right"
EriaNight
post Dec 11 2005, 03:13 AM
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K SO I recorded a new song and I know a lot of people have already heard it...but It's about this guy I like...anyway...here it is

You're Right

opinions? Comments? I think i've improved a little happy.gif

It's kind of short right now....I'm working it out. It doesn't have brilliant lyrics and its only piano and voice right now. My brother (drums), the guy (piano), and some other people are gonna sit down together and jam and write out stuffffff mellow.gif

I'm not sure how that's gonna go down...ANYWAY LISTEN TO ITT!! haha <33
 
 
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KissMe2408
post Dec 12 2005, 12:39 AM
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hey, you have a really pretty voice :) And yes, I've think you've improved since your last song. Nice job with this :) You keep writing and singing.
Oh and make another one of your movies, kinda like how you did with the "Peter Pan" one. lol I still remember that.
 
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post Dec 12 2005, 12:41 AM
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Very nice, I like your voice.
 
Hiphop d[-_-]b
post Dec 12 2005, 12:48 AM
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You have a really pretty/nice voice. The lyrics are nice. But it sounds like your voice is coming from your throat, sort of chesty, but you cant tell really that much.. Work your voice from your diaphragm, and open your mouth in length, not in width.

I like how you have your voice echoing you.
 
mzbbc
post Dec 12 2005, 01:07 AM
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it's really pretty/cute. i love your voice, and especially the echos. so pretty. _smile.gif

i think the only thing is how at points when you make your voice loud, it seems kind of sudden, like you are randomly shouting into the microphone... maybe if it was more of a crescendo?

anyway, 100000000x times better than i could ever do.
 
Rachel
post Dec 12 2005, 02:41 PM
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QUOTE(Hiphop d[-_-]b @ Dec 11 2005, 11:48 PM)
You have a really pretty/nice voice. The lyrics are nice. But it sounds like your voice is coming from your throat, sort of chesty, but you cant tell really that much.. Work your voice from your diaphragm, and open your mouth in length, not in width.

I like how you have your voice echoing you.
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Agreed. It is a really cute song. I like your voice.
 
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post Dec 12 2005, 04:17 PM
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aw, good job, i really like your voice. flowers.gif
 
Levy2k6
post Dec 12 2005, 05:00 PM
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what exactly is gonna happen with this song? are u making a band or something?

sounds pretty good but it just needs some work.. vocally.

i don't see how u can add drums and guitar to this... if you can master them in.. it would sound really awesome.. idk.. i don't think that sound could sell to alot of people...

but anyways, what do i know.. i'm not musically talented.. i just watch alot of local bands play at local venues...
 

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