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Comments?, well here she is...my xanga
DamianJ
post Nov 20 2005, 07:36 PM
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http://www.xanga.com/El3f4nt How about soem constructive criticism? biggrin.gif
 
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post Nov 20 2005, 11:43 PM
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its cool. i like the flash you did for the banner cool.gif
 
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post Nov 21 2005, 01:04 AM
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Ohmygosh, I love the flash! The whole music thing is awesome as well. Great job _smile.gif
 
kevinma03
post Nov 21 2005, 02:45 AM
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-Not bad on the flash, did you use my tutorials?
-The layout itself needs more color
-Better image quality on the girl
-There are a lot of random gaps around the layout, makes it feel disconnected and incomplete
-The winter fade effect could use some work
-The CLAF button isn't positioned on integer values, so its a little blurry.
-The word "current song" is too close to the black on its left
-THe On button would look better if the black circle didn't come up on hover
 
DamianJ
post Nov 21 2005, 06:37 PM
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Ok so i smoothened the text out now it all looks crisp...um i tried to smoothen the transtion from the pixileated version of the winter header to the normal one. Rearranged where the current song words were so as not to blend in with the layout itself, and finally the black cirlce doesnt pop up when you scroll over it. Um well i think ive made improvements although i still have a long way to go. The technique i used on Utada (girl on layout) is from a tutorial made by X_quizit the pixel grunge one i think.
 
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post Nov 21 2005, 06:38 PM
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And yes i did use Kevinma03's tutorial on flash which i am ver grateful for since none of this would have been possible without it. Thank you all. biggrin.gif
 
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post Nov 21 2005, 08:40 PM
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Please do not double post there's an edit button. Thankies.

And it's good on the flash, but like I heard before it looks like it's not complete with to many randomgaps, close those and it'll look a bit better.
 

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