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freshman now, wrote it in 7th grade [funny!]
resrchmnkygrl6
post Nov 20 2005, 06:24 PM
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just so you guys don't think that i'm weird for writing this...my friends and i wrote this song in 7th grade...JUST TRYING TO BE FUNNY! [just had to get things straight]
here it is:

i'm an underage teenage frontpage material kid
i'm so slick, you've gotta forbid me
To rhyme...
like i'd be doin' all the time...
My blockhead, bonehead friends I've got behind me are worry free
(Fiddle-dee-dee!) Just like me...
I'm the director reflector protector of all good...
I guess you can call me (Lady Robin Hood!)
It's no wonder why I'm here in Hollywood
Like you should...not be HA!
You'd better rethink
Before you lipsync on a stage again
YOu're the has-been the stand-in
There's more, that's just where i begin.
Once upon a time...there were four "patnas" in crime
Friends like these come once in a lifetime.
Yeah, you can cuss.
But what's the use?
There's no excuse for the misuse of my pimpjuice
Don't fool around on the battle ground.
Theis ain't no merry go round.
I'm gonna drop my rhymes like a bag of hot dimes
(And I'd be doin it and doin it and doin it well.)

[Chorus x2]
These ninjas know how to flow.
Don't mess with their mojo.
They'd kick your ars
Faster than you can say,
"These ninjas know how to flow"

This is my turf,
you ugly looking smurf.
Your mental block is making me laugh.
I think you'd better switch to decaf.
You better hit the road
and get a different (Area Code)
Unless you wanna get dissed like that again,
Cause I'll knock you down like a bowling pin.
Floatin like a butterfly;Stingin like a bee.
It just runs in my family tree.
Dude, you're makin me sick...
Is this some kind of a dirty trick?
I'll eat you up like butter and toast.
Heck. I"ll do it coast to coast.
(And i'd be doin it and doin it and doin it well.

[chorus x2]

This is where i draw the line
In this little song of mine.
I do what i do to make a few bucks.
Shucks, this is the deluxe.
I don't mean to diss you in front of everyone, but
(I be doin it and doin it and doin it well.)



so...what'd you think??? 7th grade flow right there!!! tee hee...comments/messages? rating??
 
illumineering
post Nov 20 2005, 06:33 PM
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Your mental block is making me laugh.
I think you'd better switch to decaf.


Great line...I'm going to use it on my boss tomorrow.
 
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post Nov 20 2005, 07:36 PM
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Your mental block is making me laugh.
I think you'd better switch to decaf.

Haha, that was somewhat amusing.

The ninja thing was cute too =)
 
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post Nov 23 2005, 08:05 PM
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Hahaha. That was very cute & entertaining laugh.gif flowers.gif
 
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post Nov 23 2005, 10:06 PM
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I LOVEED IT!..The rhyme me & a friend made in 7th grade was lame compared to yours!..haha.. laugh.gif
 
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post Nov 24 2005, 08:03 AM
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haha i really like it
esp. the decaf part.
 
resrchmnkygrl6
post Nov 26 2005, 03:06 AM
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aww....thanks guys!!! maybe i should pursue a career in rap!!! no?? i thought it was a good idea at the time...teehee
 
azn_at_heart
post Nov 26 2005, 05:30 PM
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some reason i feel alone...guess cus my true self is never shown
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cool its good i dont really try to rap or anything anymore but ure's is good
 

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