happiness, a paragraph for english class Options

[*stephinika*]

just wanted some opinions on this. we were supposed to write s 50-100 word paragraph on a subject with a topic sentence, a concluding sentence, and the body consists of only direct metaphors, in the style of E.B. White's piece "Democracy." so yeah...constructive criticism would be appreciated, thanks.

Being happy is a mixture of feeling relaxed, elated, and satisfied. Happiness is the hot water in the steaming shower after a long day. Happiness is seeing the phone display "New message". Happiness is passing by beautiful scenery on a drive that is hours long. Happiness is laughing and not being able to stop. Happiness is being able to not have a single worry on one's mind. Happiness is accidentally overhearing someone say something nice about you. Happiness is waking up on the morning of a long needed vacation. Happiness is spending quality time with one's most precious friends. Feeling happy is that state of contentedness and euphoria.