How do I tell him?, a cute poem |
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 Oct 29 2005, 03:28 PM
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Senior Member  Group: Member Posts: 88 Joined: May 2005 Member No: 137,907  |
hi guys! well i just wanted to share this cute poem i wrote.. and well.. i wrote it a long time ago for a guy who i was scared to tell him how i felt last year.. but THIS year.. im very happy to say we're going out and actually very happy! Enjoy and i hope you guys like it! and i know this might not be the BEST POEM.. but hey.. i wrote it a looong time ago! lol
 HOW DO I TELL HIM? How do I tell him? How do I release what is in? How do i cope with it? How do i tell him that my heart is lit? That when he's around, everything seems to fit? That when he's around, i get butterflies? That when he smiles, everything else just dies? Will he hear and understand my cries? Will he believe that these are no lies? Will he understand me? Will he think Im crazy? Do you think he'll care?! Just maybe! But he's such a sweetheart. From him, I must not be apart. And if he ever left, he'd kill my heart. and yet he still does, he shatters it like a dart. But yet im so confused. I feel dumb and used. I feel like a lonely child, who just went through abuse. Not knowing where to go. Not wanting my days to go by slow. Yet this feeling takes me down so low. But what do i say? With him, I don't want to play. I want to be with him everyday. I want him to lift me up and take me away. How do i tell him i like him so much? That when he's not by me, i miss him a whole bunch! But how do i tell him evrything i feel is real? HOW DO I TELL HIM HOW I FEEL? |
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Oct 30 2005, 12:26 AM
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 dripping destruction Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,282 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 21,929 |
nice. i'm covers a nice emotional feeling too. we've all felt that, i'm sure.
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Oct 30 2005, 06:28 PM
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 Residential Crazy Child Group: Member Posts: 934 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 116,897 |
Aw-thats sweet. My mothers listening to country music right now, so that killed the whole thing, but your poem is very relatable.
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Oct 30 2005, 11:28 PM
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 some reason i feel alone...guess cus my true self is never shown Group: Member Posts: 303 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 246,804 |
oh nice poem like me but i never got to even show the person and now shes out of my reach
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Nov 8 2005, 03:50 AM
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 WarPath Leader. Group: Member Posts: 668 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 216,721 |
uh uh, the poem is very nice, but 1 question, did you use`it or did you said the magic words?:)
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Nov 10 2005, 01:48 PM
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 wanna see me disco? Group: Member Posts: 136 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 286,246 |
Good poem. Expresses lots of emotion.
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Nov 10 2005, 01:55 PM
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 My desperate heart is far too weak to run for you this long. Group: Member Posts: 640 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 150,342 |
honestly...(i say that a lot in these )i think that its too..rhyming? i dont know. i dont rlly like poems that rhyme frequently.
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