Remember, short poem I came up with.... |
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 Oct 19 2005, 05:13 PM
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 Koorime  Group: Member Posts: 153 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 237,135  |
Remember
Do I know you? I don't know who you are I don't remember you Quit calling my name I see you staring at me I don't remember you I won't answer Lost in the fog Of my forgotten memories I don't remember you? Have you forgottten me? Cause I finally femember you. I think that this is one of my better poems that I've written. |
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Oct 19 2005, 05:25 PM
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Senior Member Group: Official Designer Posts: 374 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 196,246 |
i like it... :D very neat... got anymore???
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Oct 19 2005, 05:47 PM
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Koorime Group: Member Posts: 153 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 237,135 |
I'm glad that you liked it. Here's another that I came up with when I was bored and it was stuck in my notebook. It's untitled.
Mirror mirror what do you see? I see my sad reflection staring back at me do you know why I'm like this I really don't know why I used to be happy I hated to watch people be sad now all I can do now is smirk at them. I like this one but not as much as I like Remember. I usually end up writing snippets of poems or poems in school when I'm bored because that's the only way to show what I'm feeling at that moment. |
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Oct 24 2005, 07:40 PM
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very sharp and direct ... nice
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| *iNyCxShoRT* |
Oct 24 2005, 08:00 PM
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I like it. Very straight and to the point. Bravo.
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Oct 26 2005, 06:35 PM
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Koorime Group: Member Posts: 153 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 237,135 |
Thanks. Sometimes they can get pretty dark...it just depends upon how I'm feeling.
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