Eyes Of A Grave, poem/song |
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| *torngemini* |
 Oct 15 2005, 06:57 PM
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Eyes Of A Grave
(01/12/03) There she lies Her usual stare out the window She wonders why she feels The way she does inside She has it so good Yet she's losing her mind So many questions That need to be answered She's losing her way There she lies In the eyes of a grave Watching her life Being taken away She thought she could take the pain All on her own But things moved too fast Crashing and burning With her in the driver's seat She had it so good Yet she lost her mind So many questions left unanswered She lost her way There she lies In the eyes of a grave Watching her life Being taken away Somebody help her Somebody save her Somebody cry for her There she lies In the eyes of a grave Watching her life Being taken away .... |
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Oct 21 2005, 03:15 PM
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OMG! Did you write that???? It is sooooo coolll!!!!!!
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Oct 21 2005, 04:24 PM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
Nicely done. Seriously I love how you put the words together. It just seems like I can see the perspective of the girl in this. It feels like I am looking through the eyes and seeing the grave and feel like something being pulled away from me.
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| *torngemini* |
Oct 28 2005, 07:35 PM
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thank you so much
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Oct 28 2005, 09:29 PM
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wow. thats deep
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