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 Oct 7 2005, 02:11 PM
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 Don't wake ghostie.  Group: Official Member Posts: 3,546 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 2,405  |
We are two souls desperatly clinging to one another.
We have been ragged and we have been torn. And all I can do is hold on to you. The wind blows through your apricot hair and I silently wonder. You grip the mast as we sail, beyond yonder. I have no protection and you have no protector. But I have your hand in mine. And that's all I need, besides your heart. |
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Oct 7 2005, 05:01 PM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
^ Hmm short and nice. I like these kind of poems. nicely done .
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| *[Filp]Essence* |
Oct 8 2005, 09:31 AM
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really retro
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Oct 10 2005, 08:23 PM
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Don't wake ghostie. Group: Official Member Posts: 3,546 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 2,405 |
ha! thanks!
Actually, I made this one up rather quickly my good one is AS SUCH, it's in the forum somewhere... |
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| *iNyCxShoRT* |
Oct 14 2005, 08:39 PM
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Simple, short, and sweet. I can almost see it happening. Great job on the peom and keep up the good work.
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