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 May 9 2004, 09:44 PM
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ok... well my best friend said this was alright... i didnt proof read just posted it on my xanga... so here it is for y'all...
Life was always fun and games when you were a child, but some how that changed when you became a teenager. You started dating, you started to figure out who you were. You realized your potential. Some people just have it to succeed in life, yet some people do not. Your dreams all start to come down, you realize you wont be what you thought you could be. Everything starts to fall down; friendships, family and life. You become more depressed then ever because you realize you are an outcast according to the standards of society. You seem different, like anything you do and anything you say is not right. You realize you cant be perfect, in anyone eyes. The people you cared about most dont even care about you. And then things seem to get better. You seem to find someone thats exactly like you. You two share common interest. You spend hours just talking and you feel more relax with them than you did with anyone else in your whole life. You throw away the past to be with the future. You think about the future. You picture in your eyes where you will be with this person. Then you think of your own future. Your own life. Your own career. You realize that you need to grow up. That you need to change the path you are on. And you do just that. You work harder at work, you work harder at life. You try to succeed in every little aspect of life so that you can be what you want to be. Its never to late to start. I just want to live a life where I think I am perfect. Where I dont have to start being someone I dont want to be just to fit in. I want a society that looks past outer apperance and looks at the inner. |
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May 9 2004, 09:53 PM
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 hi. call me linda. Group: Official Member Posts: 8,187 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,475 |
You know, that is so true. Right now, I really wish I was back in elementary school where everyone was so innocent and simple instead of worrying about school and work and everything.
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May 10 2004, 07:23 AM
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So freakin true. You're like describing my life all the way. Only I didn't get a happy ending.
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May 10 2004, 07:42 AM
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i thought i had one... but everything came crashing down last night....
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May 10 2004, 08:56 AM
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the ending:
After living a perfect life for one week and not taking any of it for granted, you just sit back. You wait for someone to come home since they have to talk to you. You realize that they lie to you. That they wanted to end this thing quicker than it began. Everything comes crashing down. Relationships with friends, family, and the only person that you really wanted to be with. One week, it started all but one week ago. Happen so quick and ended even quicker. You come to know them greatly, you spend quite a bit of time with them. You wish you could spend more. But then one thing happens, one minor thing, that makes everything come crashing down. You hated everything you were in the past. You didnt want to go back to it. You finally found something or someone that made you feel different. But then you lose them. And your world crashes down and you wish to die. |
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May 10 2004, 06:08 PM
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Aw, I'm sorry.
I had trouble with people before, so now it's hard for me to get close to anyone anymore.  Just now, school's getting tougher, friends are getting weirder, family's getting more annoying. But I think I can deal with it. 
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May 11 2004, 02:46 AM
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life... yes the memoriez of being lil. i miss them dayz. where everyone just lovez you for you. hehe... wellz, throughout our livez will alwayz be facing critcize and allz. but, then itz just another day. what im trying to say iz that even though we dont like thingz the way it iz. what do we do? we make it better right? and u feel better after right? thats all that it iz. making a choice learning.
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May 11 2004, 07:45 PM
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 Kermit the frog = <3 Group: Member Posts: 2,315 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,215 |
look on the bright side.. thinks will change!.. hopefully it'll get better.
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May 11 2004, 08:23 PM
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 I have 6 blue blocks :3 Group: Member Posts: 2,248 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 14,959 |
QUOTE(Idyll @ May 10 2004, 6:08 PM) Aw, I'm sorry. I had trouble with people before, so now it's hard for me to get close to anyone anymore. Just now, school's getting tougher, friends are getting weirder, family's getting more annoying. But I think I can deal with it. you can deal with it? look at me! trying to get into high school with all thos preasure crushing me! anyway things will change for you but not for me. so yippey ki yay for you and boohoo for me. 
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May 11 2004, 09:44 PM
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The teenage years are always tough for everyone. We tend to feel outcasted, scrutinized, pressured, and a hundred million other bad things. But the thing to remember that the teen years don't last forever and it's only a small period in your life. If you have dreams and goals, pursue them. Don't let anything stop you because once you get out of the teens, you'll be happy that you went after what you wanted. And as the wise Freddie Mercury from Queen once sang "You can be anything you want to be. Just turn yourself into anything you think that you could ever be. Be free with your tempo, be free be free. Surrender your ego be free, be free to yourself". Then years from now when you look back on the teen years, you'll smile and be proud that you got the hell out of them... lol
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May 11 2004, 09:51 PM
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The point of my writing was to show childhood from teen years... childhood was when we had fun... teenage years are when we realize what we are going to be... who we are... and all that... teenage years arent fun... and you cant always be what you want to be... no matter how hard you try
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