new layout....., [Hip-Rock3]Setsujou Danka Options

[pahyphesis]

So this is a layout I made for my own xanga(the one I posted here before was for someone else) and its another simple one(since i'm still going to get better). Anyways its based on another song from Pop'n Music 12 Iroha called called [Hip-Rock3] Setsujou Danka by Des-ROW Gumi.

Hip-Rock=Hip-hop+Rock, if you wanted to know why the title is like that. And it features its character called Roku who is in the game. The words "Exposing everthing and destroying it like an idiot" are there becuase its an actual lyric that the rapper Tsuboi raps in Japanese and it sorta fits the character Roku

So here is the link:

[Hip-Rock3]Setsujou Danka

here's the banner of the song from the game of the title and Roku:



Setsujou Danka translates into "Flame Failure on Snow" and is the song playing on my site.
so again give me constructive critisism and comments. thanks in advance.

[xposure]

its simple, and i like it but i would but a border around the picture.

[illyria]

ok. there's good things and bad things about this skin. in my opinion anyways. i really like the layout of the skin. i like the fact that you coded it right to where you don't have to scroll to the left and the right to read the entry because alot of skins like this one, it cuts off part of the entry because they don't code it right. but, i'm not really liking that picture. and, i think another type of font for the navigation would look better. not necessarily that the font you used is bad or anything... just another would look even better. but, i also like the fact that you have two places where people can navigate. just incase the pictures don't load or something. that's thinking ahead and making sure people can navigate your site. it seems like you have a border at the top and the right side but it stops there. i think you should take it all the way around and include the bottom and the left side too.

trying not to be hard or anything. just offering constructive criticism.

[pahyphesis]

nah, its okay, thanx for your suggesstions. I'll try them now. Once again thank you for you constructive critisism.

[pahyphesis]

well, I added the borders to extend around the picture, only on the outside though, not including those inner lines because it overlaps the writing in the picture, but I will do that in my spare time to see if it looks better, and I'll also try to find a better font. thanx

[illyria]

i think it looks better. i think it looks just fine without the inner lines. much better. good job!

[luvzcha]

^agree but it still nice. Personally, i dont like yellow but maybe other people do so... blah! lol