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american`s top model.
ohhsarang
post Aug 29 2005, 10:13 PM
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hello. i just made this like couple minutes ago. i will gladly except pointers and opinion. biggrin.gif

 
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post Aug 29 2005, 10:16 PM
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Too crowded. But I like the colors.
 
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post Aug 29 2005, 10:22 PM
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It's nice. It's a bit crowded,yes. Perhaps try feathering the edges more, because I can still see the rectangular edges at the bottom pinch.gif The font doesn't really go too well, but it's okay. flowers.gif Just few tips!

Yay for colorful! tongue.gif happy.gif
 
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post Aug 29 2005, 11:34 PM
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woooo nice!! i like this a lot. the font matches to this image too. really nice!! did you get their pictures at google?
 
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post Aug 30 2005, 12:40 AM
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I like this it's "funky-fresh". The only thing I see wrong is like there is a little part on the middle of the bottom that looks like it should be blended in more. Uh I dont know if you understood that, but anyways it still looks great. Are the pics really from America's Next Top Model though?
 
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post Aug 30 2005, 06:34 AM
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I don't really like the font. And it looks very messy and crowded.
 
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post Aug 30 2005, 01:26 PM
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thats really cool, and colourful.. nice job
 
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post Aug 30 2005, 03:35 PM
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since your guys are telling me you guys see the bottom part that looks kinda squared. i tried feathering it. but doesnt come out how i want it to be. so any tips on that? _smile.gif

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yes i got these pictures from google & its from american`s top model. this was a photoshoot in japan. they were suppose to be japanese anime girls. happy.gif
 
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post Aug 30 2005, 03:42 PM
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since your guys are telling me you guys see the bottom part that looks kinda squared. i tried feathering it. but doesnt come out how i want it to be. so any tips on that? _smile.gif

If that dosent work, the only advice I can give is to start over again.

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yes i got these pictures from google & its from american`s top model. this was a photoshoot in japan. they were suppose to be japanese anime girls.  happy.gif

Oh okay I was asking because I didnt recognize the girls. I remember the Japanese photoshoot though.

EDIT//nevermind I see Eva in the middle.
 
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post Aug 30 2005, 08:44 PM
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Ooh, I like. Yes, it's a bit crowded but I think it looks good. And the font goes well!
 
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post Aug 30 2005, 09:32 PM
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edit: oo. i see the middle thing has already been brought to your attention. well, i wouldn't necessarily start all over again just because of something that small. if you're good w. brushes, you can take a black brush w. a low opacity and just kinda go over it. you can also use linear burn assuming you made this in ps. (linear burn=my lover) lol. there are a lot of ways to take care of that. just go over the white w. black.


well, the text could be more strategically placed and styled. i don't like all the sparkle brushes. assuming you used to brushes to make it flow from left to right, it didn't work. since this is a colorful picture, i'd recommend less stars, in better places, in the settings of overlay/screen. you can see where the middle picture kinda ends at the bottom. i'd suggest you place them more together, so the bg streaks kinda mesh together. that'll probably give the blend more of a together look. there is a lot going on, but if blended properly, that shouldn't matter. i don't really like the text.

sry if i was harsh, it's just the way i am. feel free to disregard me.

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post Aug 31 2005, 01:42 PM
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QUOTE(agiri @ Aug 30 2005, 10:32 PM)
well, the text could be more strategically placed and styled. i don't like all the sparkle brushes. assuming you used to brushes to make it flow from left to right, it didn't work. since this is a colorful picture, i'd recommend less stars, in better places, in the settings of overlay/screen. you can see where the middle picture kinda ends at the bottom. i'd suggest you place them more together, so the bg streaks kinda mesh together. that'll probably give the blend more of a together look. there is a lot going on, but if blended properly, that shouldn't matter. i don't really like the text.

sry if i was harsh, it's just the way i am. feel free to disregard me.

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its okay. that just shows me what to work on so i could get better at it. thanks for your comment on it. _smile.gif
 
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post Aug 31 2005, 02:13 PM
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i remember that episode...i think it looks better up close though
 
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post Aug 31 2005, 06:08 PM
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Crowded, but I like it alot!

D: though what the models are wearing is absolutely revolting. They don't even look good in it =_=;
 
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post Sep 1 2005, 12:04 AM
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^ that's because it's japanese fashion.
i think it's hott :)
 
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post Sep 1 2005, 06:15 AM
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Choose a better font next time. That took me more than a minute to figure out what it says.

And also, way too crowded. Try focusing more on the three models instead.
 

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