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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 114 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 128,613 ![]() |
hello. i just made this like couple minutes ago. i will gladly except pointers and opinion.
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#2
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![]() ;) ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,573 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 99,124 ![]() |
Too crowded. But I like the colors.
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#3
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![]() High Voltage!∞ ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 4,728 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,157 ![]() |
It's nice. It's a bit crowded,yes. Perhaps try feathering the edges more, because I can still see the rectangular edges at the bottom
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#4
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![]() i'm susan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 ![]() |
woooo nice!! i like this a lot. the font matches to this image too. really nice!! did you get their pictures at google?
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#5
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![]() I come from East Oakland where the youngstas get hyphy! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,821 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 102,942 ![]() |
I like this it's "funky-fresh". The only thing I see wrong is like there is a little part on the middle of the bottom that looks like it should be blended in more. Uh I dont know if you understood that, but anyways it still looks great. Are the pics really from America's Next Top Model though?
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#6
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![]() boo ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 5,512 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 71,765 ![]() |
I don't really like the font. And it looks very messy and crowded.
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#7
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![]() I intend to live forever-so far, so good. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 2,820 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,137 ![]() |
thats really cool, and colourful.. nice job
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#8
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 114 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 128,613 ![]() |
since your guys are telling me you guys see the bottom part that looks kinda squared. i tried feathering it. but doesnt come out how i want it to be. so any tips on that?
![]() edit__ yes i got these pictures from google & its from american`s top model. this was a photoshoot in japan. they were suppose to be japanese anime girls. ![]() |
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#9
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![]() I come from East Oakland where the youngstas get hyphy! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,821 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 102,942 ![]() |
QUOTE since your guys are telling me you guys see the bottom part that looks kinda squared. i tried feathering it. but doesnt come out how i want it to be. so any tips on that? ![]() If that dosent work, the only advice I can give is to start over again. QUOTE yes i got these pictures from google & its from american`s top model. this was a photoshoot in japan. they were suppose to be japanese anime girls. ![]() Oh okay I was asking because I didnt recognize the girls. I remember the Japanese photoshoot though. EDIT//nevermind I see Eva in the middle. |
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#10
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 2,152 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 57,818 ![]() |
Ooh, I like. Yes, it's a bit crowded but I think it looks good. And the font goes well!
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#11
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GD. <3 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 1,222 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 198,566 ![]() |
edit: oo. i see the middle thing has already been brought to your attention. well, i wouldn't necessarily start all over again just because of something that small. if you're good w. brushes, you can take a black brush w. a low opacity and just kinda go over it. you can also use linear burn assuming you made this in ps. (linear burn=my lover) lol. there are a lot of ways to take care of that. just go over the white w. black.
well, the text could be more strategically placed and styled. i don't like all the sparkle brushes. assuming you used to brushes to make it flow from left to right, it didn't work. since this is a colorful picture, i'd recommend less stars, in better places, in the settings of overlay/screen. you can see where the middle picture kinda ends at the bottom. i'd suggest you place them more together, so the bg streaks kinda mesh together. that'll probably give the blend more of a together look. there is a lot going on, but if blended properly, that shouldn't matter. i don't really like the text. sry if i was harsh, it's just the way i am. feel free to disregard me. -- agiri |
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#12
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 114 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 128,613 ![]() |
QUOTE(agiri @ Aug 30 2005, 10:32 PM) well, the text could be more strategically placed and styled. i don't like all the sparkle brushes. assuming you used to brushes to make it flow from left to right, it didn't work. since this is a colorful picture, i'd recommend less stars, in better places, in the settings of overlay/screen. you can see where the middle picture kinda ends at the bottom. i'd suggest you place them more together, so the bg streaks kinda mesh together. that'll probably give the blend more of a together look. there is a lot going on, but if blended properly, that shouldn't matter. i don't really like the text. sry if i was harsh, it's just the way i am. feel free to disregard me. its okay. that just shows me what to work on so i could get better at it. thanks for your comment on it. ![]() |
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#13
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 6,953 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 52,702 ![]() |
i remember that episode...i think it looks better up close though
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#14
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![]() Loser ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,101 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 67,558 ![]() |
Crowded, but I like it alot!
D: though what the models are wearing is absolutely revolting. They don't even look good in it =_=; |
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#15
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![]() mS diAna ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 468 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,262 ![]() |
^ that's because it's japanese fashion.
i think it's hott :) |
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#16
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![]() say maydayism. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,447 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 26,344 ![]() |
Choose a better font next time. That took me more than a minute to figure out what it says.
And also, way too crowded. Try focusing more on the three models instead. |
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