I'm Gonna Hate Myself, For this. |
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 Aug 28 2005, 06:13 PM
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 Sunlight--shine on me.  Group: Member Posts: 433 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 149,201  |
So I wrote a song...and recorded it in Pro Tools and I'm not very good at Pro Tools yet
 at least not like my mom. But I wrote all the music and lyrics and sang...and yes I know my voice is awful, but if you want to hear it you can go here ::CLICKIE:: I hate my voice, but I love the lyrics so yeah. You'll have to turn up your volume because it exported kind of dull. and yes it sounds even more awful because it's 3 mb mp3 and not the original tracks...  Oh well...just rate on a 1-10 scale and keep everything in mind. LOL I tried. Edit://No auto-tuning was involved obviously. I detest Avril. I detest Auto-tuning. But i think i needed it... |
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Aug 28 2005, 07:49 PM
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 It's anything but cute. Group: Member Posts: 403 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 185,571 |
Mmm...cheesy music. I'm not familiar with pro-tools so, yeah I Dunno. And hey, your voice is still way better than mine! It has potential.
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Aug 28 2005, 08:04 PM
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 My name's Katt. Nice to meet you! Group: Member Posts: 3,826 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,674 |
Wow. It's nice. It's a little cheesy and some of the notes you sing are a bit out of tune, but yeah, artificial tuning is a no no. It's awesome how you wrote the lyrics and composed it and everything. Great job!
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Aug 28 2005, 09:07 PM
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aw u have a cute voice. you should get a voice coach.
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Aug 28 2005, 09:13 PM
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 show me a garden thats bursting to life Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,303 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,987 |
OMG MOLLY! It is amazingly...GOOD! Seriously. It's not bad!! Get a voice coach and YOU COULD RECORD YOUR OWN SINGLE!
Yesh molly. If you've got it flaunt it dammit. |
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Aug 28 2005, 09:22 PM
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Sunlight--shine on me. Group: Member Posts: 433 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 149,201 |
EHhh I did have a voice coach for a while...problem is: like i said I'm really bad with pro tools and recording myself so even if i can sing okay outloud it still can sound really sucky...
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Aug 28 2005, 09:25 PM
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 hi. call me linda. Group: Official Member Posts: 8,187 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,475 |
Wow, it's nice. You have a cute voice and can sing better than I can. It's cool how you wrote the lyrics and music.
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Aug 28 2005, 09:30 PM
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 :) Group: Member Posts: 1,234 Joined: May 2005 Member No: 146,496 |
Ooooh, I like it!
 You have a pretty voice!
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Aug 28 2005, 10:44 PM
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 unify and defeat... divide and crumble Group: Member Posts: 2,759 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 6,379 |
lol I sound ok live, but I generally sound horrible on record unless it's good equipment. A bit of the tuning is off, and it's not really my type of music, but it's pretty good.
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Aug 29 2005, 02:40 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 893 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 68,217 |
Good start. It's not really that great, but it can improve with practice. I know for a fact that I can't sing like that...
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Aug 29 2005, 02:47 AM
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 RAWR. Group: Member Posts: 2,585 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 102,641 |
okay u get advice from the person with the experience ahah j/k. For a first recording done by yourself, its really not bad. Vocally, you arent very mature, but you have a little bit of talent there that you could really develop into something good! The background is kinda cheesy, but its a great start. Protools huh? Thats some professional stuff right there. That you even know your way around it is very impressive. I think the arrangement of the vocals is pretty cool. very creative. I say thats a pretty darn good start. And that means a lot coming from me cuz I hate on everyone lol.
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Aug 29 2005, 04:02 AM
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 High Voltage!∞ Group: Official Member Posts: 4,728 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,157 |
That's really cute
 It's awesome how you wrote the lyrics//thought of the music. Haha and you can sing way better than me  I loved it |
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Aug 29 2005, 08:25 AM
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Sunlight--shine on me. Group: Member Posts: 433 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 149,201 |
QUOTE(karamelle @ Aug 29 2005, 1:47 AM) okay u get advice from the person with the experience ahah j/k. For a first recording done by yourself, its really not bad. Vocally, you arent very mature, but you have a little bit of talent there that you could really develop into something good! The background is kinda cheesy, but its a great start. Protools huh? Thats some professional stuff right there. That you even know your way around it is very impressive. I think the arrangement of the vocals is pretty cool. very creative. I say thats a pretty darn good start. And that means a lot coming from me cuz I hate on everyone lol.  Actually---my mom owns a recording studio so I kind of know a lot about the industry and vocals and stuff. This is my mom... in the 80's I just have NOT like practiced or used my voice in a while. so it sounded kind of ehhh like jumpy. I hadn't practice control of my dynamics or anything and it sounded bad. I should do another one when I get back into the whole singing thing. I do more filming than singing. I want to delete the drums and get my bro play--i was using them as a beat to stay in time. *shrug* I don't know though. I might just write a diff song. But thank you!!
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Aug 29 2005, 08:42 AM
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atleast you tried
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Aug 29 2005, 09:25 AM
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RAWR. Group: Member Posts: 2,585 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 102,641 |
QUOTE(EriaNight @ Aug 29 2005, 8:25 AM) Actually---my mom owns a recording studio so I kind of know a lot about the industry and vocals and stuff. This is my mom... in the 80's I just have NOT like practiced or used my voice in a while. so it sounded kind of ehhh like jumpy. I hadn't practice control of my dynamics or anything and it sounded bad. I should do another one when I get back into the whole singing thing. I do more filming than singing. I want to delete the drums and get my bro play--i was using them as a beat to stay in time. *shrug* I don't know though. I might just write a diff song. But thank you!! Thats awesome. Thats what I'm doing with my life. I wanna be famous soooooooo bad. So I have a lot of respect for people who do anything musically. especially when they share, because its scary to put something you created up for scrutiny. I really think u did a good job. I hope I didn't make it sound like you didn't. I really do hear talent in your voice. Maybe you will have to do a song with me or write me a little something huh? :D |
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Aug 29 2005, 02:06 PM
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 Save a guitar, bang a guitarist. Group: Member Posts: 621 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 31,916 |
I like the lyrics a lot but yes, the background is rather cheesy. The piano is nice though. I really don't care for the ending too much though, it ends a little too suddenly, IMO. Great start and keep working at it!
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