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 Aug 14 2005, 11:09 PM
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 LunchboxXx  Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810  |
KsE: the end of heartache + senses fail: tie her down= this song. enjoy =]
WITH LOVE LIKE THIS Her hand in mine Is my forehead at the barrel or her tech nine One sweet kiss My lips are the trigger and hers are her finger tips Every time I’m with her I feel the switchblade on my jugular One sweet kiss Sing songs of the beauty and the masochist Her hand in mine Her doorbell ringing is a church bell’s chime One sweet kiss Is one more sweet check from my funeral guest list Every time I’m with her I feel the switchblade on my jugular One sweet kiss Sing songs of the beauty and the masochist I must admit with love like this Who needs self mutilation? Her burn is more than just a singe She even makes Tom Savini cringe I must admit with love likes hers Who needs self mutilation? I know I have the patience I just have to survive the duration How much it hurts. It isn’t fair It’ll only get worse but I don’t care We loved each other for a brief time I won’t get hers but she’ll get mine I must admit with love like this Who needs self mutilation? Her burn is more than just a singe She even makes Tom Savini cringe I must admit with love likes hers Who needs self mutilation? I know I have the patience I just have to survive the duration How much it hurts. It isn’t fair It’ll only get worse but I don’t care We loved each other for a brief time I won’t get hers but she’ll get mine |
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Aug 16 2005, 10:47 PM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
Oooh, this is my favorite out of the ones you've just recently posted.
 I really, REALLY like this one.... a lot. Excellent job as always.  QUOTE I must admit with love like this Who needs self mutilation? Her burn is more than just a singe She even makes Tom Savini cringe I must admit with love likes hers Who needs self mutilation? I know I have the patience I just have to survive the duration How much it hurts. It isn’t fair It’ll only get worse but I don’t care We loved each other for a brief time I won’t get hers but she’ll get mine ^  That part's the best part.
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Aug 20 2005, 05:56 AM
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Haha. Whoa. Now we have a cure for suicidal kids in two forms: the military and girls! Whatdoya know! Hahaha. Good job.
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Aug 20 2005, 06:15 AM
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 team late night queen Group: Member Posts: 1,602 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 2,861 |
^ haha
i love this poem. great job. =] |
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