It's Love...Right?, Poem Options

[Sa-Chan]

My newest poem. Enjoy. (But you don't have too).

There's a kind of...rhythm to it..

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Dancing,
In the rain,
Like children,
Like lovers without names.
Holding hands,
Romance,
Romeo and Juliet,
Star-crossed lovers on a cloudy night.
Laughing,
Till you cry,
Pain that spawns from joy,
What a joke.
You claim your hearts beat,
For one another,
But when you're seperated,
You're still alive.
Why?
A relationship,
Fueled by anger,
By lust,
And your troubled past.
The past is the past,
Let it pass,
And move on,
With or without your beloved.
Whispers,
Behind the bushes,
Loss of innocence,
Teenaged parents.
No one protected you from the media,
No one will protect your from this,
He ran off with her sister,
And she ran off with his friend.
So who's to blame?
And how will the child live,
While he drowns in her tears,
And she chokes on his fears,
But it's love...
Right?

[*stephinika*]

well written. i like the concept and the flow/style that it was written in. nice job.

[Sa-Chan]

Thank you ^_^