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I'm a girl, A poem by Roxy
REBELnDISGUISE
post Jul 30 2005, 08:27 PM
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My friend wrote this real cool poem and drew a picture for it too. I liked it a lot so I copied down the poem, took a picture of her drawing...and made this.


click the image


Whatdya think?
 
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post Jul 30 2005, 08:44 PM
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I like the poem , the image is pretty simple. 6/10.
 
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post Jul 30 2005, 09:41 PM
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maybe pink wasnt the best way to go.. but still you did a good job. nice poem.. and a very nice idea _smile.gif
 
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post Jul 30 2005, 10:09 PM
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I like the poem and picture bue you should use a clearer font.
 
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post Jul 30 2005, 10:27 PM
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QUOTE(monkigurl77 @ Jul 30 2005, 9:09 PM)
I like the poem and picture but you should use a clearer font.
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I completely agree with that statement. It's beautiful (poem and all) but just change the font. I was like crossing my eyes trying to read the poem. Good job though! I still like it alot!
 
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post Jul 31 2005, 12:09 AM
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The poem is good even though I could barely read it.
 
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post Jul 31 2005, 03:09 PM
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you should try to make teh girl look craved in instead of airbrushed...other than that it good
 
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post Jul 31 2005, 04:17 PM
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QUOTE(mzkandi @ Jul 31 2005, 12:09 AM)
The poem is good even though I could barely read it.
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I could hardly read it too. ermm.gif

QUOTE(REBELinDISGUISE @ Jul 30 2005, 8:27 PM)
  My friend wrote this real cool poem and drew a picture for it too. I liked it a lot so I copied down the poem, took a picture of her drawing...and made this.


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v628/tal...oi/Imagirl3.jpg
click the image


Whatdya think?
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I like it, but the text is hard to read. Good job on the imaging!
 

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